BSG fic - Promises 14 / 17

[suffolkgirl]

Chapter Fourteen

“Lee?”

Kara looked around the cave, heart thumping, peering into corners, pushing back the curtain around the washing area.

He wasn’t there.

She couldn’t understand it.  Sure, she’d been lost in her thoughts, but not so distracted that he could have walked past without her noticing.

Where the hell had he gone?

“Lee!” she

Comments

[etilia76]

Awww, more to read :D

I really liked the detail of planning Lee and his obsession with places with more than one way out.

The part about Tyrol and the tracker he put on Cally is a bit creepy :D

Don't know why, but this part made me giggle:
"If anything happens to her, I'm going to kill him."
Kara glared at him. "Well, if anything happens to Lee, I'm going to kill Cally."

Exciting chapter, I'm really intrigued and curious what happens next :D

[suffolkgirl]

The part about Tyrol and the tracker he put on Cally is a bit creepy :D

Oh dear! To be honest, that's in there for practical reasons only. Halfway through writing this chapter, I thought 'Shit! How are they going to find Cally and Lee?' and this was the answer I came up with...probably because I'd just been watching Veronica Mars using trackers..!

[etilia76]

I always love Veronica's clever ideas and her knowledge about technical stuff :). She's a bright girl in a witty TV show.

I can imagine that Tyrol loves to experiment with these things and needs someone to test on his new experimental equipment, so despite being slightly creepy, it does make sense for him :)

[suffolkgirl]

Okay, now you've made him sound really creepy :-)

[etilia76]

*lol* I meant to experiment with new technical equipment - not with stalking on his wife/girlfriend :D