The Winter King

[sudge]

Once upon a time, there was a land ruled by four kings. Although each king was very powerful, the duties of the king were such that they had to rest very often, and so the land was ruled by a different king for each of the seasons. The King of Springtime was a calm King, nurturing and kind, and the land would always grow while in his care. The King

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[anonymous]

This was perfect, did you write it?

[northward]

Sorry, this was me!

[sudge]

Yeah, that was me. Took my brave pills and put it online...

Thanks!

[cheesegimp]

Oh man. I loved that.

[sudge]

Thanks! Glad to hear it!

[scowlotica]

i agree stephen, it is unseasonably warm for winter :P

[sudge]

and too rainy....I am growing gills. Cool. Sorta.

[scowlotica]

p.s it is good, even if you were going for themes about you moping in your tinsel tiara

wait i can do this...

Stephen that was lovely to read

No meanness!

[matthew_hyde]

Good work. REALLY good work.

You've got to post something else now. :)

[sudge]

Thanks alot mate, I appreciate it!

I wrote this for a friend of mine, she wrote a poem with the term "the winter king" in it, and for some reason I thought of a fairy tale and this is what came of it.

Themes on an LJ comment! Give me a topic/style and I will try to write something around it! (it'll be good for me...)

[drsedgley]

This is VERY impressive. It's difficult to write something short that's not cliche'd and trite, but this is just great.

Sorry to burst into your blog, by the way - I'm a friend of Matt's!

I think I need an avatar...

Rich

[sudge]

Thanks very much! No need to apologise either, its there to be read!

[bruised_candy]

Love it! It's really good and has potential to be a longer piece. Encore!

(It's Raisah btw.) :P