Come back

Apr 22, 2008 20:31

title : come back
rating : g
pairing: ryo nishikido//tatsuya ueda
disclaimer : not owning the character.
summary : ueda leaves. ryo wants him back
note : short. kind of very short

Broken glass and slammed door and he's gone.

Ryo looks at his cellphone wondering whether or not he should excuse himself. He ends sending ton of messages. Unanswered. All ( Read more... )

pairing : nishikido ryo/ueda tatsuya, johnny's entertainment, rating : g, genre : fanfiction

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sibarita April 22 2008, 18:56:37 UTC
I like the contrast and the similarity between the first and the last line a lot.
:3

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ionnesaysrawr April 22 2008, 23:17:15 UTC
word. ♥ :D

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sucre_d0rge April 23 2008, 11:04:47 UTC
thank you ♥

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sucre_d0rge April 23 2008, 11:04:10 UTC
Thank you <3 I had a hard time to find the last line hahaha, I had so much lines in mind and I'm still a bit deceived with it. But to me, it was what sticked the most with Ryo and Ueda (or with the image I have of these two ^__^)

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ueda_love1 April 22 2008, 21:54:47 UTC
kawaii~~~~but i wish this was longer =3 who doesnt love a drenced ueda ?? thanks

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sucre_d0rge April 23 2008, 11:08:12 UTC
I somehow wish too ^^;.
hehehe. girls who don't like feminine looking guys^^? but well, we need more wet!ueda
thanks for commenting

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letitbegin April 23 2008, 01:23:32 UTC
Ooooh this was lovely! It's cute and sweet and bitter and romantic all at once. Great job! I love it.

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sucre_d0rge April 23 2008, 11:08:41 UTC
thank you very much

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lonely_heartz April 23 2008, 01:35:47 UTC
that was cute!!
thank youuu =]

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sucre_d0rge April 23 2008, 11:09:20 UTC
thanks to you for commenting ♥

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the4ntagonist April 23 2008, 02:06:07 UTC
Wah~ This is good♥ (even though its short D: I still love it anyways♥ XD)
Good job♥

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sucre_d0rge April 23 2008, 11:09:51 UTC
thank you ~♥♥♥

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