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suchreverie

The Weighted Wind

Nov 23, 2008 15:02

Title: The Weighted Wind
Author: suchreverie
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Per Manum
Classification: VRA
Summary: There's an energy that exists between two people, a tingling feeling that connects us in invisible ways.

( Her body was shaking like I'd never felt it before. )

Comments 23

memories_child November 23 2008, 21:34:06 UTC

Sometimes I think she has a doorway into my mind that she can open with the slightest touch of her fingers, the softest echo of my name.

She does, doesn't she.

She was perched on top of me, her panties still on, my boxers still on, her knees straddling my hips, and we were participating in what was to be noted as yet another exercise in self-restraint. We had quite a comprehensive list going.

This made me laugh out loud! I don't think two characters have ever exercised more self-restraint than these two.

I really liked reading this. Hearing it from Mulder's point of view, you've caught him so well. It feels like what it would have been like.

suchreverie November 23 2008, 21:46:08 UTC

Thank you so much.
I like the self-restraint idea too. Those poor peopple.

anniemarie75 November 23 2008, 22:15:19 UTC

I...I...just...fuck...no words...damn you...it's like you are IN their heads...

damn

suchreverie November 23 2008, 22:18:48 UTC

That's a very high compliment. Thank you so much!

ren515 November 23 2008, 22:32:31 UTC

Love it! Have you ever written under a different name? I would love to check out any prior works.

suchreverie November 24 2008, 15:36:04 UTC

Just this one, I'm fairly new at this but I'm getting quickly swept up in it! Thank you so much.

scrubschick November 23 2008, 23:36:58 UTC

I led her to the edge slowly and brought her away again. I thought of the times I'd dreamed of doing just this, exactly this way, and how even in my dreams she didn't taste this sweet or feel this soft or sound this beautiful, like an angel. This is so sweet! Just lovely. *happy sigh*

suchreverie November 24 2008, 15:36:21 UTC

Thank you so much.

yendrie November 24 2008, 01:27:54 UTC

That was so freaking precious and amazing and incredible and you have them so spot on and the angst was so good that I cannot describe it and I cannot use punctuation marks because of my huge fangirling moment and... yeah. :) You rock my socks. I need to watch Permanum again! ♥

suchreverie November 24 2008, 15:36:52 UTC

Watch and enjoy. It will give you a new appreciation for the ending scene, huh? Thank you so much!