Never Catch Him Looking Up, Never Looking Down

[suchdisguise]

Title: Never Catch Him Looking Up, Never Looking Down
Author: ifeelbetter
Warning: Ummm...this is The Sadness. I pulled out all the stops and made myself a bit melancholy for the rest of the evening after I wrote this. I don't want to spoil the ending but it is Not Happy.
Disclaimer: I own nothing of value besides one truly awesome ukulele.
Word Count: 2,075

Comments

[ilovetakahana]

That ending - it hurts. This is really beautiful.

[ifeelbetter]

The prompter ASKED for crying...and I can do angst. I am, like, PREPARED to angst up the place.

[niftywithan]

;A;

... YOU KILLED ME. WITH THE LOVELINESS AND THE SAD AND THE... GUH.

This was absolutely beautiful. It felt almost wistful and the entire premise is just heart-breaking. Wonderful, wonderful job, even though you broke me. ♥

PS: It was your birthday yesterday, yes? HAPPY BIRTHDAY! *confetti* :D

[ifeelbetter]

I APOLOGIZE FOR YOUR UNTIMELY DEATH.

And thanks for the bday confetti. :)

[and_the_damned]

this was so sad and beautiful. and so sad. wow, you packed a punch with this one

[ifeelbetter]

Glad you liked!

[delilah_lilith]

Ouch. Painful, yet romantic.

[ifeelbetter]

Thanks :)

[catalinacat]

Oh. Oh my goodness. That was just lovely!
I wasn't expecting that twist at all, and the ending just killed me.
Great fic :)

[ifeelbetter]

I apologize for killing you.