Touch - Chapter 14

Jul 16, 2011 05:02

Title: Touch
Fandom: Naruto
Rating: PG-13
Content Notes: None
Disclaimer: I have no rights to or claims on the Naruto franchise, trademark, copyright, or characters. This is for fun, not profit.
Summary: In the future what's left of humanity sends the Rokudaime Hokage back in time to make some changes. Sadly, they can't send all of her. When a seven- ( Read more... )

pg-13, naruto, touch, fanfic

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Re: DLRM comment - 1 of 2 subtle_shades July 18 2011, 15:39:40 UTC
First off - SQUEEE!!! I *love* this review! It is glorious!

*pets it and coos at it*

Secondly, please don't worry about your guesses blotting or not blotting out. It's probably fine so long as I don't confirm or deny stuff. Guesses are just fun. (If it was against the rules to guess in public places, I'd be in so much trouble! I'm not nearly as thoughtful as you are! ~_~)

I'm glad that Iruka and Tenzo came off well since they get, like, no screen time. (And when they *are* anywhere near Naruto, you just know it's only a matter of time until someone impales them and they have to pass out.)

The seals on the book are a little detail so I don't want you to be disappointed by them. I'm pretty sure they won't be a huge deal later except in terms of Sakura's growth as she figures out what the third seal does later on.

I do like to compare/contrast Tenzo to the rest of the cast. He shares a lot of Kakashi's genius issues and, arguably, he has an equally awful childhood as Naruto yet he doesn't wave the flag of his pain in every single person's face to get them to roll over and do what he wants. *is looking at Naruto* I like him and honestly think that he should be a jonin sensei.

(By the way, it's not just Narutopedia. Kishi has math and logic fail on an epic scale! I mean, technically, Anko should be older than Tenzo since she was Orochimaru's student and Tenzo was Orochimaru's stolen test subject. If Tenzo graduated from the academy at 6 (and made chunin that year - go mad tree skills!) then he had to have been enrolled at 5 or so. Which means he had to be rescued at 4 or 5 at the latest. Anko (who graduated at age 10 according to Narutopedia) *should* be at least five or six years *older* than Tenzo since I find it highly unlikely that Orochimaru would enroll his illicit and immoral genetic experiment in school. Yet she's listed as being 2 years *younger* than Tenzo. At that point, I made up my own ages for Tenzo and Anko and I'm sticking with those.)

*grins* Sasuke is such a delicate drama queen. Very 'me' oriented, that one is. I *loved* that speech because it very nicely showed that, at the end of the day, Sasuke hadn't learned anything *important* from Kakashi - and, arguably, neither had Naruto.

I thought the Rain trio was older than Minato tbh. So I'm pretty sure the Terrible Trio isn't what you're thinking at all.

*grins* Thanks for reading and commenting!

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