Three Kings and an Epiphany (Chapter 4)

Mar 24, 2014 00:17

Not sure I stated this before, but I do not own the characters I am using - I am just borrowing them for a bit. Thank you to the many friends and commenters, you guys are a special kind of awesome. Special thanks to Allison, who decided on Sam's birthdate, and Shay, who helped with the birthstones and their meaning. Oh, and, HAPPY BIRTHDAY, BIRDIE ( Read more... )

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sigh. HAPPY sigh. slm37 March 24 2014, 13:59:19 UTC
OKAY--I am NOT understanding the hate?!?!?! Am I the only one seeing the HOPE laced through all of this? It's right there, it's RIGHT behind the curtain. A curtain which is just about to rise and then there will be all kinds of rounds of applause, standing ovations, roses being thrown, littering the stage floor because HE LOVES HER AND HE CAN'T KEEP HOLDING IT IN AND DENYING IT. It WILL come out, he'll burst if he doesn't let it out. She is everywhere--he now REALLY cannot sleep w/o thinking of her, he can't look at that damn schedule w/o thinking of her. Probably can't look at that streetlamp outside his house the same again, either. Always her halo it will be.

I LOVED this(no lie, George Michael)!!! I mean, EPHIPHANY! She's an ANGEL delivering his gift on the(his) ephiphany. Sam's slow on the uptake, but it's all there. The necklace! AND HE MADE SURE THERE WAS MORE ROOM FOR OTHER BIRTHSTONES WHEN THE TIME COMES!!!!!! AND THE MATTRESS PAD--A GLIMPSE OF THE "OLD" THEM, THE TEASING, THE INNUENDO. SIGH!

THIS WAS GREAT(and I mean that, I'm not just stroking your ego). I cannot wait for the next chapter. This has just been so clever--wise men, ephiphany, HIS angel:) And HOPE. And FAITH people, have some FAITH:)

Now, in the next chapter, is he going to run after her--find her crying at the bus stop and apologize for being an asshole, maybe have a dose of Andy's verbal diarrhea and tell her that she is his everything?! Can't wait to find out.

THANK YOU, PAL!!!!! What a lovely way to start my b-day:)

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