Breathe 10 - Pain is Relative, Part 1

[suborbital]

 
Title: Breathe
Pairing: Will/Skandar, Anna/OFC
Rating: R
Summary: Skandar and William reach a resolution.  .
Disclaimer: Not mine, not real!  It's FICTION.
A/N: Breathe is the sequel series to ' Chronicles of Skandar'. Read that first!  Also, this chapter contains lesbefriends smex. Don't hate the femmeslash!
Read earlier chapters - Breathe.

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Comments

[kiddobill]

yeah i was a bit surprised that the two girls are the first to break the pg13 mold of this story. but the drama llama parade that's separating Skan and Will only makes sense they haven't (pardon my bluntness) just gotten it on already. They need serious make up sex (again pardon my bluntness). :(
on a more serious note i love the duality that anna is facing. I mean i feel bad for her and for sarah even more, but it's very real. great addition.
as for the boys. *sigh* they do need to grow out of their childish love, but there's still very much more adult love (no pun intended) that can be had between them. one of those growing apprieciations and respects that comes from being with someone for so long and going through so much together. not the love bug, but real genuine peaceful love that you can wake up and smile at in the morning, not cuz everything's perfect, but simply because you're surrounded by the people you care about and who care about you. Isn't that the only way relationships last??? You wake up every morning and make that decision to love someone unconditionally in hopes that it is returned. Is that choice the fairy tale, or is it simply what you call a commitment?
Is the fairy tale between Skan and Will over? yeah...obviously. but does that mean their relationship goes with it???
I suppose i'll sleep on it and see what my dreams say,
You keep me sitting with a thinking cap sub
take care and hope you're doing well.