COS14 - A Play for Life
Title: Chronicles of Skandar
Chapter: 14 - A Play for Life / Choices
Pairing: Will/Skandar.
Rating: R
Summary: William finally sees the play he inspired. Tensions rise as Skandar pushes for their relationship to go public.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these characters, and they have no bearing on anyone at all. It's FICTION.
Warnings: Slash. ( Read more... )
'tis 'ere, rocked! I wish William (almost called him Peter again, urgh) would just accept the fact that Skandar wants to be more than just a scandal what they are now, hiding behind a closet, more like a house! it's like... William is trying to deny their fucking relationship! he is, isn't he? bastard
oh, and speaking of the word "fuck", Skandar sure did use a lot of those, =) and although he said he didn't like hearing it from William, he's only allowed to say it, eh? lol.
but really, though, I can feel Skandar's anger, and William may be, according to him, trying to do what's best for Skan, I don't think this whole 'relationship' won't work out if he doesn't give what his boyfriend, soon to be husband, wants. it's like, he scorns him! SHAME ON WILLIAM!
but of course your going to change that, right? at the end, they're going to crawl out of their closet and go solo on other people's asses, antisocial style! 'cause we live in an unkind world, but hey, they can't give up now.
Skander actually has some potential and has the balls to admit that nothing could get in their way, that nothing could stop their devoting love, which is why I'm on Skan's side on this one. but what does Will do, huh? he's being an asshole! I still love him anyway.
oh, and Sarah! SHE'S SUCH A RAD PERSON! am I using the three-letter word right? yeah, well whatever, she rocks! she's a one awesome supporting character, I mean, who wouldn't like Sarah?
and I still don't get the whole, "William-gets-brutalized-for-loving-Skandar", I wanna see how that one works, I really DO hope it's not something bad, something worse to come between the two, that could butcher them! tssk, tssk. *shakes head, disappointedly.*
P.S. thank you for ruining my whole "I'm-so-happy-and-hyper" mood! urgh, because of you, your gonna end this! I'm gonna kick my computer if I read a "To Be Concluded" on either Monday or Tuesday, 'cause it will deserve it, for making me read it. you just had to, didn't you? the least thing you can do is write us readers a happy ending and I'll be happy... *dot dot dot* enough... but that's so like you saying "this is perhaps one time when you will not sway me, my love. I am going." in Just And Magnificent v3.6 - Part 1, but more like, "this is perhaps one time when you will not sway me, I am going to end this without a doubt." hehe, anyway, I must stop now before I go totally psycho-like.
I tried to make a long feedback, I hope this is long enough.
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Thank you so much! It's frustrating isn't it? William thinks he's protecting Skandar, but I think Skandar truly believes what he says in that he's prepared to give it all up just to keep Will. William is well intentioned and that's a really admirable trait. Skandar did use the word fuck a lot. But he's just really frustrated. And he prefers that he do the swearing instead of William, because he thinks William's mouth is too pure for such vulgar language, but doesn't think the same of himself. And what's this about a happy ending? One of my stories will have a happy ending. One of my stories will have an ending. lol will it be COS or JAM? I'm so glady ou love Sarah! You know, somtimes my words can have different meanings. The 'William gets brutalized for loving Skandar' could mean many things. Like William getting harrassed by someone who learns of their relationship and tries to protect Skandar by yelling at Will. William could get bashed because someone sees him and Skandar making out and they corner Will and gay bash him. Or William could brutalize his own emotions for loving Skandar and decide Skandar's better off without him after all. So you know, don't give it too much thought. It could mean many things. You'll find out soon enough. I'm really almost certain that the next part of COS14 will read 'To Be Concluded' down the bottom. I'm almost positive that COS15 will be the last chapter in this story.
Oh and can I just say. I LOVED your reference to JAM v3.6. You really like that story, don't you? I'm so flattered. Your use of that line is gold. Thank you so much for your feedback. Made my night!
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