Wonderland's End [1/??]

[sublimeparadigm]

I've decided I'm going to post this in parts as it comes along. I honestly haven't the slightest clue how long it's going to be; I *do* at least have a (...very vague) idea of where I'm going with it. Sorta. Um, we'll see. Right. After I finish I'm gonna go back and edit it all, so consider this something of a rough draft

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[evilsimon]

This is my intrigued face. :D

[sublimeparadigm]

:D :D :D :D :D

[whitereflection]

HELLO I NEED MORE OF THIS NO RUSH JUST GONNA SIT OVER HERE AND BE PATIENT AND ALGKDFJSGKJ.

Right. Had to get that out of the way. :| You = ♥♥♥♥♥ This = Perfect. Seriously. You've got characters *pegged* and it feels so out of the manga it makes me glee unto incoherency. :| If it's a rough draft, it's a damned good one, because I wasn't catching anything off, even though I was making myself read slow to savor and really be able to visualize.

Gaaah, love how you're setting this up, the feel of each scene--you've got a really good touch with building up story and suspense and such. Good way to somehow target in on exactly the style of writing I dig most. :D

ILU Dangit, wish I knew how to do the sparkle command. XD; Oh, and you get hugs ^____^

[sublimeparadigm]

I'm sorta feeling the same impatience about writing it. >.> I just want it to come out already so *I* know what's going on! XDDD

I'm glad it feels out-of-the-manga. That's definitely what I was going for, although it'll probably be getting a bit NON-manga-like later on. ;o

ILU2. And thank you! *huggles*

[techiegoat]

Ooooh, I don't know much about XXXHolic yet, but I like this! I suppose I'll like it even more once I've seen the series/read the manga. ^^;

[sublimeparadigm]

Thanks! And yeah, definitely check it out! :)

[sublimeparadigm]

AWESOME. I always wanted a medal. 8D

Thanks a lot! I'm glad it's coming out well. ;)

[meretricula]

AUGH I AM ECSTATIC THAT YOU'RE WRITING THIS BUT THE SUSPENSE IS AWFUL!

'kay, I'll be coherent now. I'm glad the beginning, at least, focused more on Doumeki's perspective because I don't think enough fics do that. Now I'm itching for Watanuki's crazy thoughts on the matter, but that's okay. The little spazzball will, I assume, be showing up more in later installments. =)

Speaking of later installments: soon, please? If Yuuko is worried, I'm worried too. And the writing is FABULOUS. Just so you know.

[sublimeparadigm]

The suspense is what makes it good! I swear! :D :D :D

I'm actually feeling the *pull* of the Doumeki perspective more than Watanuki. I guess because, while Watanuki is easier to understand, it can get exhausting trying to convey him? (I mean REALLY, where does he get all that energy???)

I'll try and get it out soon! I want to work on it right now, but . . . homework. ;o;

THANK YOU. :D