Shinee fanfic: Bad timing

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Title: Bad Timing
Characters/Pairing: Onew, Jongkey
Genre: Comedy
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Evidently, the leader also has bad timing. (sequel to ungodly hours) for siaht. :D
Disclaimer: the guys belong to SM.
Length: oneshot. 2600 words.

Comments

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JKFDGHDFUGIHEIGHSJYFGBHSDFBS;F'SKLFJDISFHSDIU omfg. you seriously do not know how happy it makes me that this was up to (DID YOU SAY BEYOND?!) your expectations. ugh, where's my thesaurus (i need bigger words) ;-;

see, like, ever since i heard of onew being in the milk club, it changed my perspective of him. i used to think he was a total goof, but then i heard in one interview where he said something like "i'm like tofu because i can curl into a ball in a room full of people and no one will notice me." then what i like to think is that he is the type of guy to try and try and try until he succeeds, but when he fails and fails and fails (and doesn't realize it's not his fault) he'll take it into his own hands and make it worse, but eventually will make something good out of it. idk. i don't think that made sense. >.>

omg thank you. <3 i have to admit it is, i had to stop and think "what would onew really do?" because he's the type where you can write him reclusive, like a looser taemin or minho, or a bit more aggressive-like (jonghyun or key). i'm relived to know that you hink i'm close to the reality part. //speech

spazz ftw. i wrote it for you and the jongkey

<3333 really? omg.... really? //speechless

[siaht]

YEAH I SAID BEY0ND BECAUSE I WAS WAITING ME SOME ORDINARY JONGKEY SMUT - not that coming from you it'd be anywhere near ordinary, but - YOU TOTALLY PAWNED ME.

I really want to read more of your Onew soon because he is so loveable. ♥ AND YOUR KEY ALSO WINS FOR LIFE. AND YOUR JONGKEY TOO, UGHHHH. ;-;

So hey, you inspired me this much:

->
“My god you think we can do this now?” Key’s voice came out, raspy, at the same time as a deep sucking of air through nose and throat altogether.

His answer came in the sound of a fly being harshly pulled down. His fly.

The amount of air he had intake came out soundly, his hands pointlessly grasping the plain wooden surface behind him where he was currently being pinned to. He had been wanting that, and more importantly, wanting that to actually happen before they would get interrupted. It was almost a hopeless case; Key couldn’t even concentrate properly in Jonghyun’s hands creeping up inside his briefs - whoa, was he pantless already? Jonghyun’s getting faster by the day, Key mentally remarks, and his mind is prompt in adding that maybe he too was trying to get that done before someone opened that friggin’ door on them.

What is the fun of doing it like this?

There is some fun, oh yeah there is. Yeah, yeah, yeah oh god, Jjong… and Key wants to bang his head against the wood behind him, because he isn’t sure why his heart is beating so impossibly fast, but from past experiences he thinks it’s because he’s anticipating for the nuisance of a leader they have to fling that closet door open and gape at them, again. Though now, now he wishes that won’t happen, but he is sure it will, he is so sure. He can’t foresee what kind of reaction Onew would have seeing what Jonghyun was doing to him now. Only gaping would not quite do it.

Key bangs his head on the wood. When Jonghyun halts his movements halfway from taking him to the slit into his mouth and looks up, questioning eyes, Key moans as to pretend the self-harm was out of pleasure, and Jonghyun proceeds a tad bit more enthusiastically than just moments ago.

I’m traumatized, Key concludes squeezing his eyes shut even harder, making him feel aware of the pressure on his globes. But Jonghyun works unknowingly on distracting his mind from the imminence of being cut off his high by sudden clarity and a stuttering voice trying to apologize or make the situation less shocking for its own owner, or both, which is not going to happen exactly like this in case they get caught now. Because right now Jonghyun is sucking him off, and that Onew has never gotten to see before.

Jonghyun is swallowing him so deftly that Key doesn’t know why he can’t stop thinking of these things and direct his mind to the great pleasure that is being provided by Jonghyun’s tongue and lips, the sliding, the sucking, the friction. It’s been over five minutes, he very unsurely calculates. He won’t appear anymore now, Key hopes that’s not wishful thinking.

And so he relaxes, although immediately tensing again because Jonghyun is so fucking good, and fast, and warm. He coats his member with saliva, he pumps his head powerfully, and brings all Key’s thoughts and apprehensions to jumble together and become a heavy dough weighing in his skull. The second time he bangs his head against the wood and moans, it’s because he can’t hold his climax back any longer.

It’s hot inside the closet, really hot. This makes it all the more contrasting when there’s a sudden gush of cool air produced by the swinging of one of the double doors being open.

With the still ringing white noise in his ears, Key isn’t sure of what Onew was mumbling to himself before he settled his eyes on them. But the “Oh fuck” that he lets out when Jonghyun, that dumbhead boyfriend of his opens his mouth to speak,

that he is sure he heard.
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lol, I hope you get the ending. xDDDD

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i was afraid smut would interfere with the lulz. >.>

you make me happyyyyy. <3

NOW,

HOLY FLIPPING HOT PAN OF SHIT. YOUR = JONGKEY TOTAL PWNAGE, WAIT WTF MINE DOES NOT PWN YOURS. YOU GOT IT TWISTEDDDDDD!

I LOVE YOU OKAY.

HOLD ON, WHERE IS IT, WHERE THE FUCK IS IT?!



YES.

YES, I GET THE ENDING. HOLY SHITTTTTTT. /caps

plus i just got done pwning some noobs on call of duty. and this is just the icing on the cakkkkeeeee. <3333