You Finally Said It

[stupidbakau]

Title: You Finally Said It
Pairing: broken! Onew/Key
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG
Length: 576 words
Summary: Key left Onew with another guy
A/n: HAPPY VALENTINE DAY!!! A short story that is done within an hour.. SORRY...

Comments

[stupidbakau]

Key don't love Onew anymore...
YA! Onew always give me the feeling that he will be so loyal to his wife XD
THANKS For LOVING ME!!!
HAHA!! Happy BELATED Valentine's Day!!!
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[mayzeeacala]

you keep broke jinki's heart. while I was dreaming about getting it someday :( and WHY on valentines? :))
good job anyway :)
who ever that man key was with im gonna kill him! :))

[stupidbakau]

Cause the story is for Valentines :)
I wanted to write the man's name and prelong the story..
Or letting Onew caught them in action while... you know :D
But it's seems to be pretty long, so I just skip that part out XD
And I don't who to use as a bad guy in SHINee... CAUSE I LOVE THEM ALL!!! XD
Thanks for commenting^^
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[xxqod]

ah I'm so happy you posted up this sad Valentine's story! ^^
You had me crying near the end and Jinki even knowing Key was 'cheating' on him already one month after the start of their relationship.
(That's how I read it)

HAPPY BELATED VALENTINE'S DAY! :D
<3 ~~

[stupidbakau]

Yeah, you are right..
Key started cheating him after one month they started their relationship...
I guess it is pretty early eh...
I wanted to post three but two crop up due to the house cleaning
and the quality of the story... (I have someone to check XD)
One of it may be out during feburary or March
since I have finish the story just that I have to beta and add a few more scene^^
Both is songfic XD
HAPP BELATED VALENTINE'S DAY TO YOU TOO!!!
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[wackowacko711]

poor jinki. getting his heart broken on V-day even though he's know for longer that he no longer has the key to Key's heart.

maybe he should have realized earlier and said "i love you" earlier. just too many maybes.

I hope both boys will find their own happiness in the future.

[stupidbakau]

Yup, he love Key too much :)
There is a lot of maybes...
They sure will^^
Thanks for the comment!!!
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[shuuseieki]

AWHHHHHHH DDDDDDDD:
This drove me to the verge of tears? I think it was really painful how Onew's mindlessly clinging on to his love for Key, and that he doesn't care even if he knows Key's with another guy, because he really does love him and that's all that matters. This was just so heartbreaking; Key had to say it on Valentine's too. Thank you for writing this - it was short but got the message and emotion across. ♥

[stupidbakau]

That's GREAT that the message got across! XD <3
KEy is heartless in someway and other...
Onew always gives me the feel even if his wife betrayed him
he will always love her...
Thanks for the comment!!!!!!!!
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[shuuseieki]

He does seem capable of being heartless, that's for sure. But some part of me feels that he really does care for all the others, and that he will never do anything to hurt them in any way. As for Onew, yes - he loves everyone with all his heart; he'd likely never forget the bond he shares with another. I think you managed to capture both of them perfectly in this fic, as short as it was! :3

Thank you for writing! /hugs

[stupidbakau]

*HUG BACK*
Thanks for reading XD
In real life key is simply awesome!!!
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