For "quite out of practice" your fic is very readable. For me, this kind of A/E fic is close to perfect. Men of the world who are just emotionally a little f'd up (loves me these lads all BAMFy). I'd love you to find that Arthur voice in the same vein - an interesting way to explore potential in this kind of character dynamic.
I'm working on a few pieces that haven't quite gelled yet; I keep thinking up more details of their history, while what I need to do is write a current resolution.
I wish I could manip cleverly enough to make a picture of a twenty-year-old Arthur in dress blues.
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Thanks for sharing. :)
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I love the BAMFness of them, too. I really want to see this as a movie, but a little bit of fiction will have to do.
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I do appreciate the encouragement, though. I love this fandom.
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Great work. I love this.
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I'm working on a few pieces that haven't quite gelled yet; I keep thinking up more details of their history, while what I need to do is write a current resolution.
I wish I could manip cleverly enough to make a picture of a twenty-year-old Arthur in dress blues.
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I'll hope for a sequel :)
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