Thirty Four Sparkly Garters~
So they're still doing these auctions. Some things never change, including the kid's reactions, poor things. I can still remember jinxing myself so I didn't have to go through it when the Quidditch teams were put on. Well, not like I could take any chances considering some of the males in my year group...
Here is the feedback for those who did the assignment I asked. Pupils who didn't are getting a warning this time. Failure to turn in the next assigment will result in remedial work being given.
Prince of all Cosmos: 13/20 - While I can understand the name is interesting, please try and stick to the historic facts next time.
Taiga Aisaka: 17/20 - Very rounded paper, just a little extra push next time to up your mark is needed.
Jomy Marquis Shin: 19/20 - I'm willing to let your...creative questions not deter me from the rest of your excellent work. Just try to keep in mind that when it comes to the exams for NEWT's next year, those markers don't have as much of a sense of humour.
Miki Kaoru: 18/20 - Try to give detail on everything, missing out on these costs marks. Overall, a very well written piece of work.
Rosemarine Arion: 20/20 - Nothing to be said except very well done and keep up the good work.
Let's see, also... [sudden massive inkblots and spluttering before journal is abruptly slammed shut.]
[OOC: Strike viewable but unreadable. And why he is flailing? Probably has something to do with his mother putting this in an envelope and sending it to him. XD]
Here is the feedback for those who did the assignment I asked. Pupils who didn't are getting a warning this time. Failure to turn in the next assigment will result in remedial work being given.
Prince of all Cosmos: 13/20 - While I can understand the name is interesting, please try and stick to the historic facts next time.
Taiga Aisaka: 17/20 - Very rounded paper, just a little extra push next time to up your mark is needed.
Jomy Marquis Shin: 19/20 - I'm willing to let your...creative questions not deter me from the rest of your excellent work. Just try to keep in mind that when it comes to the exams for NEWT's next year, those markers don't have as much of a sense of humour.
Miki Kaoru: 18/20 - Try to give detail on everything, missing out on these costs marks. Overall, a very well written piece of work.
Rosemarine Arion: 20/20 - Nothing to be said except very well done and keep up the good work.
Let's see, also... [sudden massive inkblots and spluttering before journal is abruptly slammed shut.]
[OOC: Strike viewable but unreadable. And why he is flailing? Probably has something to do with his mother putting this in an envelope and sending it to him. XD]
