SB: Chapter 2 - Dead Man Walking (Part I of II)

Aug 04, 2008 08:58

Title: Chapter 2 - Dead Man Walking
Author: das_mervin and Mrs. Hyde
Word Count: 8,055
Summary: A battle-torn but alive Agent Sands covers his ass and also makes an unpleasant discovery.

Chapter 2 - Dead Man Walking (Part I of II) )

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sunshine304 August 4 2008, 16:45:12 UTC
And there he is. :)

(...)conversations about Jeff’s just dreamy eyes, and had laughed himself silly when he’d heard the wide array of adjectives they’d used to describe them.
"Chocolate orbs", anyone? *g* Of course he'd laugh. ;)

He was looking forward to his next opportunity to walk through an airport metal detector with a sort of grim amusement-that was going to be fun.
*snorts* I'd like to be there and witness, please. *g* I think he used his last bit of humour for that statement - because, yes, this time it really isn't funny anymore.

but somehow when it was his kid, he could deal with it
And practically everything else concerning Sands and Chiclet (or Jesús - that name is made of win! Oh the irony. *g*). He calls him "little shit" and whatnot, but it's so obvious that he likes him! ^^ And I think that a least one reason is that Sands isn't used to something like that - someone standing by his side without demanding anything in return. It's a character trait Sands lacks, and probably hasn't experienced before (but he didn't ( ... )

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strngbedfellows August 4 2008, 17:58:45 UTC
Yep, there he is. :D

Yay! You're just catching everything, aren't you? :D

I'm glad you liked the name. And yes, it is obvious that he likes him--he just doesn't wanna admit it! And I'm so glad you like Chiclet--that's what I'm trying to go for, after all. :)

Thanks for pointing out the typo! Will fix in a jiffy.

Yep, Thursday is Part II. Can't give anything away, but I hope you enjoy it. :D

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das_mervin August 4 2008, 21:03:45 UTC
Yay for Chiclet! And I suppose Sands gets a yay, too. ;)

Thanks for reading!

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strngbedfellows August 4 2008, 22:22:50 UTC
I'm so glad you like it, SaHar! And I'm so glad everybody seems to like Sands and Chiclet's relationship! We were really hoping everybody would enjoy them together, because, really, how can you possibly split them up? They're made for each other!

Well, we just had to name him that. Made the blind see, took his hand and made him walk and all that. :) Yes, we're goofy.

Well, he never gave up until he shot Ajedrez in the movie--and even then, he still raised his hand and flagged down his kid! He's a mover, that one!

Again, I'm so glad you like it! And I hope we're painting and accurate portrayal of Snape so you can truly get to know him!

*hugs SaHar just because he's so nice for reading, even though he only knows one fandom*

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l_j_b August 4 2008, 23:17:58 UTC
I love this - all of it :D
*lurks around*
'tis brilliant, I shall wait for more!

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strngbedfellows August 4 2008, 23:47:54 UTC
Thank you for reading and reviewing! Next update on Thursday!

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lady_linnet August 5 2008, 05:50:35 UTC
Just for the record, I adore you're charicterization of this guy so much.

Chiclet's name! I have to admit, I've taken to listening to your soundtrack for this while reading it, and I smiled when I read that sentence.

You've got their relationship down, too. Am loving this fic more and more xD

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strngbedfellows August 5 2008, 16:46:22 UTC
Aww--thank you so much! And we're glad you like the soundtrack and the fic itself!

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