Fic: Missing Piece of the Puzzle 5/7, Jared/Jensen/Genevieve, NC-17

Jun 13, 2013 22:07

Title: Missing Piece of the Puzzle
Fandom: Supernatural RPF
Pairing: Jensen Ackles/Jared Padalecki/Genevieve Cortese
Chapter: 5/7
Length 4444
Rating NC-17
Warnings/Kinks dub-con, mpreg, dystopia, sort of slave fic

Summary In a world where women can no longer have children, genetically engineered Omegas fill this function- if you can pay the price ( Read more... )

missing piece of the puzzle, supernatural rpf, jensen ackles/jared padalecki/genevieve , wip

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scarletscarlet June 13 2013, 21:52:28 UTC
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!

Stomping my heart into the floor. This is just so GOOD, which means it's utterly wrenching and really disturbing and hard to read, but at the same time, getting to the end of an update is like NO DON'T STOP! I think I was holding my breath at some points. Oh god, nooo, he's got the time bomb going. DDDDD:

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stripytights June 16 2013, 21:49:54 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm so glad it felt like that because this is when the story really kicks off I think. The next chapter is actually almost done since I was on a roll.

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ghostyouknow27 June 13 2013, 23:39:37 UTC
This is so painful and terrible! By which I mean I love i! You've communicated how absolutely crushing the reality of this pregnancy is: Jensen's going to die, it's Jared and Gen's fuck-up, there's no way out for any of them. I love that Jared still has some shadows of his old way of thinking, too, but that they keep getting dashed against observable reality. It's so good! I'm already gasping for more.

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stripytights June 16 2013, 21:52:13 UTC
Thank you! Painful and terrible are the most delightful descriptors (I'm not joking) and I'm really glad just how terrible it is came through, and especially that what I was doing with Jared worked- he's not suddenly all on-board of 'they're just like us, yay humans etc'.

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tipsy_kitty June 14 2013, 03:16:15 UTC
Well, of course you know I COMPLETELY ADORE this story even as I fret about the inevitable (???) conclusion. I'm so glad you picked up the thread again, I've been thinking about these three over the past few months, and wondering what was in store for them...

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stripytights June 16 2013, 21:53:26 UTC
Cheers very much, both for the comment and the edit, it's very much appreciated. I'm not going to leave the same sort of gap between chapters again- next one is almost done!

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snickfic June 14 2013, 07:35:55 UTC
I second all Scarlet's flailing. Gah, this is just so sad and awful. JENSEN. And he doesn't even have anyone to talk to; he can't. And there's nothing they can do. And just. AAAAAAAAH.

Which is to say, this chapter inspired a lot of feeeeeelings. :D

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stripytights June 16 2013, 21:55:47 UTC
Thank you very much ♥ I'm so glad the horror is coming through a bit, and the futileness of there literally being nothing they can do except find a way to live with what they've done.

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stripytights June 16 2013, 21:56:25 UTC
I promise it'll be soon, next chapter is almost done. Thank you!

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