Comments | striking_sparks: PoT: Facing Forward

striking_sparks

PoT: Facing Forward

Feb 28, 2006 00:14

Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: pre-Tezuka/Ryoma
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Entire anime series.
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Comments 55

seii_ryu February 28 2006, 00:43:35 UTC

Wow! There were so many places where I just... wow. *hearts madly* Can't seem to find anything to say- it seems like Ryoma understands Tezuka more than Tezuka does him, but at the same time it's all the things that they're not aware of, that the other catches. *rambles on at length about how I love your fics*

♥

flyby February 28 2006, 02:49:42 UTC

Thank you. I totally fail at replies; I have been staring at this comment box and typing half sentences for ten minutes. I think that Tezuka is not quite aware yet of all the ways in which Ryoma's need for him goes beyond tennis. But he's never been able to hold back from Ryoma.

sugaahcube February 28 2006, 01:40:51 UTC

♥ I loved it ;;

flyby February 28 2006, 02:51:17 UTC

Thank you! I was worried about this one.

storyteller February 28 2006, 02:17:50 UTC

Oh oh oh oh. ♥

I think this is the best TezuRyo you've written so far. This is so right, the language is so beautiful and the dynamic is breathtaking. I ADORE how you made them communicate with tennis, I ADORE so much about this that I would just end up quoting everything here, because nothing here was superfluous or unnecessary, it was all perfect and omg, the hope, omg, the everything.

Thank you so much for this, I am shaking, and am not typing properly.

Just. Tezuka giving things to Ryoma that he doesn't give to anyone else. Ryoma coming back. Back to Tezuka. Not yet - but soon enough.

♥

storyteller February 28 2006, 02:19:13 UTC

haahhaa, and I just noticed that the two people before me also used gigantic hearts of d00m. WHICH YOU MOST DEFINITELY DESERVE.

flyby February 28 2006, 03:02:29 UTC

;_; Thank you!

I wibbled so much over posting this, because it just sort of arrived in my head a couple of nights ago without much actual thought on my part. I tend to distrust that.

asdfgkl hearts everywhere :)) Thank you.

venivincere February 28 2006, 02:35:43 UTC

Oh, what beautiful, intense, subconcious longing! You do both their voices very, very well. Excellent work! I love it!

flyby February 28 2006, 02:52:14 UTC

Thank you very much!

bookshop February 28 2006, 04:55:18 UTC

I think this is the best thing you've ever written.

flyby March 1 2006, 01:10:25 UTC

...I am still kind of o.O because. First thought to last word in under 24 hours.

:(( Did I say thank you? I can't remember! I am downloading the Insane Boat Movie, even though I should probably be going to bed, because the torrent is going ridiculously fast. Tezuka and the dinosaurs!