PoT: Love

Jan 14, 2006 01:14

Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Rating: G
Notes: Ryoma-centric genfic; set about two years before the series. 1900 words, Rinko POV, fluffy.

Love )

pot, ryoma, gen

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weirdlyyours January 14 2006, 01:39:38 UTC
That is adorable. Ryoma watching through the window of a pet store. Ryoma petting Karupin. Ryoma smiling. ♥

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flyby January 15 2006, 04:37:15 UTC
^_^ Thank you.

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starlightstorm January 14 2006, 01:48:06 UTC
*dies of cute*
That's just adorable~! Adorable and well-written, besides. I like your take on Rinko, and Ryoma's even got a good balance of snark and sweet. Thank you for writing! ♥

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flyby January 15 2006, 05:00:19 UTC
Thank you. Ryoma is just adorable with Karupin. ^_^

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seii_ryu January 14 2006, 01:59:02 UTC
*melts into incoherent puddle of goo*

... This is getting more and more regular, and so cute, and I can so imagine Nanjiroh going, "Che, another annoying mouth around" and his subsequent horror when Karupin proves to be house-trained to bite. ^^

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flyby January 15 2006, 05:33:29 UTC
:D Rinko would refuse to believe it, because Karupin is always a perfectly polite kitty when she's around.

Thank you for reading!

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measuringlife January 14 2006, 01:59:45 UTC
D'awwww~ That's utterly adorable. ♥! You write so well, it's smooth and with nice imagery but never seems pretentious. Everyone seems perfectly IC, like it was a scene missing from the anime ♥

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flyby January 15 2006, 05:34:32 UTC
♥ Thank you!

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wonapalei January 14 2006, 02:03:19 UTC
Oh. Oh. I'm all verklempt. *sniffle* It just really hit me, how Karupin really must be the only thing/person Ryouma has to care about before Seigaku and Tezuka. No wonder he's so distraught when Karupin follows him to school and he doesn't know if he's safe. And I think I may as well mention here that I love one of the lines in one of your 7snogs ficlets--"Everything", I think--where Ryouma feels disloyal to Karupin for not being satisfied with cuddling up to him and wanting Tezuka instead as well. I repeat: Tezuka/Ryouma/Karupin OT3!

Also, love the neighbours' bewilderment over the Japanese epithets and the cleaning lady resigning after seeing the magazines. :D

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flyby January 14 2006, 03:15:54 UTC
I knoooow. Oh Ryoma. If he had a friend in the world before Seigaku I would be very surprised. And his mother works, and his father's Nanjiroh, and wah. Now I want to write Rinko's reaction to Ryoma's relationship with Tezuka.

Tezuka/Ryouma/Karupin OT3!

Like this? Um, I forget where the hell I found that, and the named site either doesn't exist or is very broken, so.

Thank you! ^_^

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wonapalei January 14 2006, 18:26:49 UTC
Eeee! That is adorable! I was actually picturing them all snuggled up in bed, with Ryouma and Karupin both asleep and being petted by Indulgent!Tezuka, but this is so cute! I love how relaxed Tezuka looks.

If he had a friend in the world before Seigaku I would be very surprised.
I think it's pretty clear that he didn't. He doesn't seem particularly annoyed about suddenly picking up and moving to Japan, and the way he reacts to the fangirling shows that he never got much of that either; he's sort of bewildered to start out with, and then quickly learns to ignore it.

Now I want to write Rinko's reaction to Ryoma's relationship with Tezuka.
Does Rinko really pay much attention to Ryouma's tennis life? I mean, she never shows up at his tournaments, she never seems to ask him anything about it. Even Nanako shows more interest. But I'd love to see her reaction, not just to a romantic relationship, but to him suddenly caring about other people, like his tennis team ( ... )

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