QR / Chapter 19 - Cover Me

[streetscribbles]

Title: Quiet Revolution / Chapter 19 - Cover Me
Author: street scribbles
Rating: R
Summary: Hermione does what she does best - questions everything. Draco is around with some of the answers, but less than they both realize when more things to be questioned suddenly erupt.
A/N: I have no words. I know it's been forever (forever), and I thought

Comments

[thebloodinside]

This chapter was spectacular. A beautiful one to present after such a long hiatus. The way you are able to portray emotion and thoughts unsaid is really inspiring. It completely pulls your audience into the moment and makes us feel like we are standing there, shoulder to shoulder with Hermione and Draco.

I am excited about the relationship between them! It is complicated, not one of the typical flat, two-dimensional, unrealistic relationships that often plague fanfiction. It seems real because of the insecurities and doubts but also the moments of complete trust and overwhelming satisfaction. I love your Hermione/Draco. They work perfectly.

I can hardly wait for your next chapter. The plot!! I'm going to go crazy from anticipation! I look forward to the confrontation between Neville and Draco and finding out why others can see Draco as well. You have done superbly at making us want to know more. We hate you for that. Congratulations! =D

Take your time with the next chapter. That's the problem with writing so well: your audience will begin to expect (and demand) it of you every time! Not that we're worried; I'm sure your next installment will be ten times as luscious.

[streetscribbles]

Hey Jess! Good to hear from you again. Your comment on this last chapter sort of fueled me to bust ass and finish this chapter, so I have to thank you for that. As well as thanking you for all this FABULOUS feedback! Dude, where to start? I don't know if all of it is really true, but I will gladly accept it all as real. ;) Thanks especially for saying that you think my H and D work well together, because that's one of the hardest parts to write.

And I love how you say "we," like you represent a club or something, ahah, it's super cute. :) Thank you again for ALL of this! I really appreciate it. :)

[thebloodinside]

Awww...You're going to make me blush. =D And I wouldn't write it if it weren't absolutely true. There is not room enough in my head for all of my wild speculations incited by QR. It's actually quite frustrating, not knowing where you're going with this. But, that's the nature of the thing, right?

And I suppose I should stop saying "we." I get caught up in the splendor that is your writing and lump myself with the rest of your loyal and adoring audience. I will, in future comments, try not to appear to represent any of your other readers. So, on behalf of myself (and myself alone), I thank you most graciously for your fabulous work and remind you of my enthusiasm for this project and any future additions. ( =D I'm practicing.)