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werewolfsfan April 30 2009, 01:51:58 UTC
Did you hear me squealing like a mad woman when I saw that you posted another chapter? Again, very well written. I'm not sure that your Sirius was as cynical and war stressed as I would have expected. But then, it's your tale to tell. Perhaps the brothers were close in your world.
I find your portrayal of R.A.B. is nuanced and deep though. Dumbledore is properly manipulative and interesting here. The ending is brilliant!

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strayaesthetic April 30 2009, 02:16:25 UTC
I am extremely pleased to have even one squealing fan. :)

I, too, am not sure I got Sirius right here, but this part was still mostly about Regulus, so I wasn't sure what else to do with him. We will have more Sirius later, and I will hopefully get better at him. The two weren't close in mind, at least since Hogwarts, but Sirius has a very wide protective streak for Reg (much to Reg's annoyance, usually), and tends to have a blind spot about people he cares about in general.

Thanks again!

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plynn78 April 30 2009, 02:23:08 UTC
Yay! Another Chapter. I am very much enjoying this so far. I look forward to reading more.

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strayaesthetic April 30 2009, 02:31:29 UTC
Yay! Another comment! :)

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werewolfsfan April 30 2009, 11:00:24 UTC
I believe that you posted the original chapter at regulus_centric or last_generation so why not cross post?

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strayaesthetic April 30 2009, 13:21:53 UTC
I did post at regulus_centric. I'll try last_generation as well.

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bemoan1000 April 30 2009, 17:31:41 UTC
There’s a bit of a loophole regarding objects used for transportation. It’s there so brooms can’t be illegal. As long as no muggle sees me flying it, I can’t be held liable.”
I like that idea.
“I’m so sorry, Sirius. Obliviate.” Poor Sirius.
Nice chapter I look forward to what happens next.

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strayaesthetic May 3 2009, 01:14:40 UTC
To show you the silly amount that I think about these things, I think this loophole was closed at the same time the ban on flying carpets was made that Crouch, Sr. mentions in GoF.

Glad you liked the chapter!

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strayaesthetic July 20 2009, 00:25:38 UTC
I'm glad you liked it :)

Regulus is going to have an interesting time. I'm working on chapter 3 now, please forgive my slowness.

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