Did you hear me squealing like a mad woman when I saw that you posted another chapter? Again, very well written. I'm not sure that your Sirius was as cynical and war stressed as I would have expected. But then, it's your tale to tell. Perhaps the brothers were close in your world. I find your portrayal of R.A.B. is nuanced and deep though. Dumbledore is properly manipulative and interesting here. The ending is brilliant!
I am extremely pleased to have even one squealing fan. :)
I, too, am not sure I got Sirius right here, but this part was still mostly about Regulus, so I wasn't sure what else to do with him. We will have more Sirius later, and I will hopefully get better at him. The two weren't close in mind, at least since Hogwarts, but Sirius has a very wide protective streak for Reg (much to Reg's annoyance, usually), and tends to have a blind spot about people he cares about in general.
There’s a bit of a loophole regarding objects used for transportation. It’s there so brooms can’t be illegal. As long as no muggle sees me flying it, I can’t be held liable.” I like that idea. “I’m so sorry, Sirius. Obliviate.” Poor Sirius. Nice chapter I look forward to what happens next.
To show you the silly amount that I think about these things, I think this loophole was closed at the same time the ban on flying carpets was made that Crouch, Sr. mentions in GoF.
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I find your portrayal of R.A.B. is nuanced and deep though. Dumbledore is properly manipulative and interesting here. The ending is brilliant!
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I, too, am not sure I got Sirius right here, but this part was still mostly about Regulus, so I wasn't sure what else to do with him. We will have more Sirius later, and I will hopefully get better at him. The two weren't close in mind, at least since Hogwarts, but Sirius has a very wide protective streak for Reg (much to Reg's annoyance, usually), and tends to have a blind spot about people he cares about in general.
Thanks again!
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I like that idea.
“I’m so sorry, Sirius. Obliviate.” Poor Sirius.
Nice chapter I look forward to what happens next.
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Glad you liked the chapter!
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Regulus is going to have an interesting time. I'm working on chapter 3 now, please forgive my slowness.
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