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Grey's Anatomy: The Rest Of Our Lives (1/2)

May 08, 2011 23:20

Fandom: Grey's Anatomy
Title: The Rest Of Our Lives
Rating: PG13
Status: In progress (1/2)
Author: englishstrawbie
Characters/Pairing: Callie/Arizona
Disclaimer: Here.
Author's Note: filling in some gaps from the White Wedding. This part is set around Callie's conversation with Mama Torres, including some Arizona/Carlos bonding and dealing with the aftermath of ( Read more... )

grey's anatomy, ga: callie/arizona

Comments 21

majincammy May 8 2011, 22:51:03 UTC

Glad to see these scenes written in. You've managed to fill the gaps in that part of the episode and it really helps to understand the mind frame each were in. I really liked it. Nice job! :D

englishstrawbie May 9 2011, 20:53:32 UTC

Thank you! I really wanted to write an Arizona/Carlos scene and I thought that it led in nicely to filling some gaps around the scene between Callie and her mom. I'm glad you like it! :)

neolithicdream May 8 2011, 22:52:15 UTC

Great stuff!

englishstrawbie May 9 2011, 20:53:46 UTC

Thank you!

worldwnomirrors May 8 2011, 22:59:59 UTC

Oh I loved this. The scene that Carlos left was the scene that to me felt like it was cut SO short. So I thank you this, I needed it! I liked what Carlos said to Arizona and I also LOVED what Callie said to her mom when she was about to leave. Powerful stuff. Awesome writing! Looking forward to part 2 :)

worldwnomirrors May 8 2011, 23:01:31 UTC

Oh there were some mistakes in that comment, I see now... Haha, hope it makes sense anyway! :P

englishstrawbie May 9 2011, 21:01:20 UTC

I really enjoyed the episode but if I had one complaint about the episode, it's that there needed to be a bit more to that scene - more Callie & Carlos and more Callie & Arizona. But that's what fanfic is for, right?! I can't wait to read all the missing scene fics that people are coming up with!

Thanks for commenting, I'm glad you like it! :)

i_fly_solo May 8 2011, 23:09:40 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you wrote this. I was toying with writing something similar (and I still might, if I ever get around to it, so...maybe in July), but I'm really glad you did because you captured it so beautifully. I love that you've incorporated what we didn't see into what we did see - I can totally believe that it happened and I wish it had! Can't wait for part 2!

englishstrawbie May 9 2011, 21:03:00 UTC

July?! It's going to feel like a long hiatus so we'll all be depending on fics to get us through! Thanks so much for your comment, I'm so glad you like it. :)

walking_weapon May 8 2011, 23:34:15 UTC

yay! this was great, thanks for filling in those gaps.

englishstrawbie May 9 2011, 21:05:13 UTC

Thank you - glad you like it!