o_o dude...so dark D: Wait, Yami is being torture or Yugi? -is confused- Either way both ended up being BAD. D: How can you do this to them~ they are so sweet!
There's a sequel for this...a couple of themes down the line. Then you can find the answer to your question. I can't write them cute and fluffy every time. Even I need to take a break from that. @_@
Haha, yeah, I'm in Canada, and university students tend to start the week after Labour Day. :3
...My brain is dead. xD Hmn, how to review...on one hand, I really like it. You got the mood across excellently and I always admire a change from the "norm." I can't help being in awe at the skill of the writing. But even as an AU...I can't see it. (Something like that happening in general, definitely, there are some WEIRD people out there in the world.) But I'm biased about Yami and Yugi, unfortunately, so I just can't see the character of 'Atemu' in this meshing with Yami's personality in any type of way. Yugi, on the other hand, is still very canon. I like how you've showed his strength...too many people make him too weak.
I wish you good luck in your term! I hope the time of this posting isn't a bad omen. xD I mean with school starting for you and a hurricane nearby me and all. ^^; But I actually consider 666 lucky, so...maybe it's actually a good omen. u_u
I think you've probably noticed by now I like deviating from the "norm" with this challenge, huh? *CAAAAAACKLES* Don't worry. There's a sequel. It should clear up some...confusion or whatever. :D Reading all the reviewer's comments makes me want to hurry up and finish writing the next few themes and POST. Fu fu fu~
Thank you [x2]! It's not. I didn't even remember this theme to have 666 words until I reopened the document. xD
Yeah, I have noticed...getting away from the norm is fun though. Ah, a sequel...*begins theorizing what the sequel will 'clear up'* Really?? *prods more people to comment in hopes of sooner updates* xDD
oh wow, someone who knows the difference between "should've" and the non-existant "should of"! I also liked your twist of Yugi being a millionaire with a company to inherit. It's like Kaiba, but a million times cuter
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School for you? Man, I started 2 weeks ago...XD
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I can't write them cute and fluffy every time. Even I need to take a break from that. @_@
Haha, yeah, I'm in Canada, and university students tend to start the week after Labour Day. :3
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True, sometimes you need a break from all the fluffiness.
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...O___O
...My brain is dead. xD
Hmn, how to review...on one hand, I really like it. You got the mood across excellently and I always admire a change from the "norm." I can't help being in awe at the skill of the writing. But even as an AU...I can't see it. (Something like that happening in general, definitely, there are some WEIRD people out there in the world.) But I'm biased about Yami and Yugi, unfortunately, so I just can't see the character of 'Atemu' in this meshing with Yami's personality in any type of way.
Yugi, on the other hand, is still very canon. I like how you've showed his strength...too many people make him too weak.
I wish you good luck in your term!
I hope the time of this posting isn't a bad omen. xD I mean with school starting for you and a hurricane nearby me and all. ^^; But I actually consider 666 lucky, so...maybe it's actually a good omen. u_u
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I think you've probably noticed by now I like deviating from the "norm" with this challenge, huh?
*CAAAAAACKLES* Don't worry. There's a sequel. It should clear up some...confusion or whatever. :D Reading all the reviewer's comments makes me want to hurry up and finish writing the next few themes and POST. Fu fu fu~
Thank you [x2]!
It's not. I didn't even remember this theme to have 666 words until I reopened the document. xD
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Yeah, I have noticed...getting away from the norm is fun though.
Ah, a sequel...*begins theorizing what the sequel will 'clear up'* Really?? *prods more people to comment in hopes of sooner updates* xDD
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Unfortunately I'm still stuck. *curses Writer's Block*
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I also liked your twist of Yugi being a millionaire with a company to inherit. It's like Kaiba, but a million times cuter
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Thank you, thank you~ =)
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