You know, despite the fact that I hate Kaiba with a burning of the nuclear fission level...this fic actually made me...gah...kind of...sort of...not hate him completely. Please shoot me now. >.>
xD That, and also despite the fact that I was never much of a Puppyshipper...and that I still found myself giggling at this...I am once again in awe of your writing. *.*
This line puzzled me a little: Why I can’t I try-what? No, no... I think there's one too many 'I's.
Heheh...I like pointless stories though.
And the Yami and Yugi bits were cute. Yes...I had to mention that. *runs away*
YAAAAAY!!! I've managed to make Chey hate Kaiba less for the duration of 879 words! XD;; *flushes* Thank you for the compliment (again); really, I'm not that great. ^^; *doesn't take praise well*
*head/desk* You'd think after re-reading it several times I would've picked that up, but noooo... It's strange that Microsoft Word didn't pick that up either. o_O Huh.
Yup, no story of mine is ever complete without some Puzzleshipping stuff thrown in there. 8D
xDD Believe me, that is a HUGE feat. You should feel quite special. ^^ Psh, and if I say you're good, you're good. v.v
Word is weird like that. It'll flip out telling me to correct stuff all the time, stuff that I KNOW is right, but it lets those kind of things slip by. >.>
Ooh, yeah, and Microsoft Word doesn't understand the 'effect' you're after... It always tells me to put an "and" after a comma because it appears I'm doing a list! *pokes it*
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xD That, and also despite the fact that I was never much of a Puppyshipper...and that I still found myself giggling at this...I am once again in awe of your writing. *.*
This line puzzled me a little: Why I can’t I try-what? No, no...
I think there's one too many 'I's.
Heheh...I like pointless stories though.
And the Yami and Yugi bits were cute. Yes...I had to mention that. *runs away*
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*flushes* Thank you for the compliment (again); really, I'm not that great. ^^; *doesn't take praise well*
*head/desk* You'd think after re-reading it several times I would've picked that up, but noooo... It's strange that Microsoft Word didn't pick that up either. o_O Huh.
Yup, no story of mine is ever complete without some Puzzleshipping stuff thrown in there. 8D
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Word is weird like that. It'll flip out telling me to correct stuff all the time, stuff that I KNOW is right, but it lets those kind of things slip by. >.>
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Ooh, yeah, and Microsoft Word doesn't understand the 'effect' you're after... It always tells me to put an "and" after a comma because it appears I'm doing a list! *pokes it*
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*hi-five*
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Thank you for the review! *beams and hi-fives back* =D
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Thanks very muchly of a muchness, glad you likes.
Thanks you for the writing. =D
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Haha, writing for pure amusement; I'm glad you like it. ^_^
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