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Nicely done. the_skywolves October 6 2007, 04:33:59 UTC
I love how twisted the POV of the Puzzle is! Sardonic, wry... very well worded.

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Re: Nicely done. strawberrykaoru October 6 2007, 23:44:34 UTC
Thanks! XD;; Although I wasn't aiming for sardonic!Puzzle...maybe it just came across that way. xD

Thanks for the review again~ =]

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duelist_gurl163 October 6 2007, 16:07:33 UTC
The Puzzle is quite talkative. xDD And allow me to congratulate you, because I'm never going to be able to look at a cucumber again without going, "OMFG YAMI/YUGI." >.>

That aside, I liked this! It was way creative...I never thought of making the Puzzle muse over their connection before, though when I think about it now, the Puzzle WOULD be the one that could explain it best. (I am now rather jealous of it in fact...) Even though this wasn't overly fluffy, it WAS still cute, it made me smile. I think it's actually the first thing to make me smile all day. ^^;

I was created to bring peace and justice to the world, not to trap my owner inside, dammit!
That line is just begging for a picture of the Puzzle with a vein pulse on it. Should such a doodle appear on my art journal, you'll know you were the inspiration. xD

edit: In the info part it says PG-13 and in the header it says PG...not really a big deal, just thought I'd mention it. ^^;

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strawberrykaoru October 6 2007, 23:52:26 UTC
HUZZAH YAY! 8D I've managed to inspire two things with this theme... what's that saying? Kill two birds with one stone (even though it's hardly intended at all)? XD;;

The Puzzle is a big mouth, sort of like Jounouchi. =P; But yeah, he hadn't the chance to do it in 3,000 years because he wasn't whole, so he has a right to blab on for forever like that. xD
*transforms you into the Puzzle*
Almost everything about Yami/Yuugi is cute (except the really...graphic...ones...). It's like second nature or something, haha.

You know what, I thought I changed it everywhere. Obviously not though... *shoots self*

Again, thanks for the review! =]

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strawberrykaoru October 7 2007, 03:47:43 UTC
Yay! ...while humour wasn't what I really intended, but I suppose the Puzzle sounded like it, didn't it...? Heh.

Yeah, Yami's real name is Atem(u). Some people spell it without the 'u'. But as I've said, this takes place before he gets his memory back. *points to 'Spoilers' line*

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strawberrykaoru October 7 2007, 04:43:55 UTC
LOL I understood. Just...everything before the Egyptian arc that you saw. =P When everyone was all more innocent and less violent. LOL.

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