I don't see too much OOCness in this, really...I can easily believe Yugi secretly wants to know who his soulmate is and would try something silly to find out. I'm getting a Yugi-as-the-MC vibe, even though it's AU.
On that note, I'd never heard of this myth. But it's really interesting, and I love the way you tied it in! I kind of want to draw the ending scene now...xD I dig the present-tense writing style, too. ^^ It adds a nice sense of immediacy.
All right, LJ's playing up and I haven't been receiving any alerts. Again...how typical. =(
Who said anything about Yugi being the curious one? XD It gave off that vibe? Hmm...interesting. Wait a sec - "MC"? o_O;
No?? I've heard it since I was little...maybe it was from television or something, haha. Please do! I'm practising my present-tense, there are a couple more down the challenge in present tense too, I believe.
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I don't see too much OOCness in this, really...I can easily believe Yugi secretly wants to know who his soulmate is and would try something silly to find out. I'm getting a Yugi-as-the-MC vibe, even though it's AU.
On that note, I'd never heard of this myth. But it's really interesting, and I love the way you tied it in! I kind of want to draw the ending scene now...xD I dig the present-tense writing style, too. ^^ It adds a nice sense of immediacy.
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All right, LJ's playing up and I haven't been receiving any alerts. Again...how typical. =(
Who said anything about Yugi being the curious one? XD It gave off that vibe? Hmm...interesting. Wait a sec - "MC"? o_O;
No?? I've heard it since I was little...maybe it was from television or something, haha. Please do! I'm practising my present-tense, there are a couple more down the challenge in present tense too, I believe.
Thanks for the comment! <3
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MC = main character. The main "he" being referred to in this case. ^^;
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