Comments | strawberrykaoru: [fic] Theme 054 "Weakness", for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/100_wangsts">100_wangsts</a></strong> {遊☆戯☆王: Yami+Yuugi; G}

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[fic] Theme 054 "Weakness", for 100_wangsts {遊☆戯☆王: Yami+Yuugi; G}

Jun 20, 2009 21:21

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&challenge: 100_wangsts, pairing: puzzleshipping, fandom: yuugiou [遊☆戯☆王], !fic, holiday: father's day

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oceannspray June 21 2009, 04:34:56 UTC

Very cute. ^_^

Although, I think I would have preferred if The King of Games had remained thick-headed and declared that he *still* didn't have any weaknesses. Maybe Yuugi is more a distraction... XD

strawberrykaoru June 21 2009, 22:39:35 UTC

Well, The King of Games tends to not think clearly when anywhere near Yuugi... *grins*

Thanks for the comment! <3

duelist_gurl163 June 21 2009, 13:35:30 UTC

...Wait, when did I inspire this? xD I'm glad I did though! Such a cute drabble - and so very true. x3

I thought this part of the line: and lay at the other’s complete mercy? was worded somewhat awkwardly. I get what it means, it just seemed a bit off.

Hee~ a very sweet first drabble. =D

strawberrykaoru June 21 2009, 22:41:27 UTC

A looooooooong time ago...around one of the earliest themes of the challenge. xD

Hmm...*rolls it around a couple of times* I can't find a better way to phrase it though. *pokes* Oh English, why?!

Thanks for the comment! <3