Just how many TeniPuri sites have we by now? *lol* So, actually, this one is just TV Tokyo their site for the OVA and this is the official one
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Nya! I wanted to read these when you posted them, but I kept running out of time! But I had the chance to read now, and I really enjoyed both of them! ^_^ I'm impressed too, by your grammar, especially since I know that English is not your first language, and yeah, I really think you did a wonderful job with these. The mistakes that were there (and there really weren't many at all) didn't take away at all from the story, or the feelings conveyed there. I love your view of the GP and I really thought they were very much in character, and nya! You should write more! I definitely feel like you have the talent for it, and I'm so impressed that you're able to write in another language at all, let alone so well. ^__^
Really? To be honest, I really hadn´t thought to receive positive comments about the stories in the first place. More, that they would get ignored or wander in the category "yet another talentless wannabe-story-teller". But, that one of the best writers out there is really thinking like this, is really flattering and encouraging. Just, in the case that I really should write more, I hope that you won´t regret it afterwards. *lol*
<3 <3 <3 Thank you, really! But, if you might have any critic, please, please feel free to tell me, will you?
Nya, I really appreciate you saying that. ;__; I haven't been writing very long at all, and I still have a hard time even thinking of myself as a writer sometimes. It's more something I want to be seen as, I guess, and something I aspire to, so... I just really appreciate that compliment. ♥
And honestly I really enjoyed these. There's a certain quality to your writing, an honestly and an earnestness that I really feel is missing a lot of the time with fanfiction. And I mean, there some word choice things and grammatical things that I personally would change, being a native speaker, but other than that the ideas flow really well, and I really found it enjoyable to read, and refreshing too, in a way. I agree with ssphilosophy too - you do have a really good feel for the characters, which really is the most important thing. *nodnod* Definitely keep writing! As much as you can! I have a feeling that the more you write, the easier it will be for you to feel comfortable in the language, etc. ^_^
Which words would you replace and were are the grammatical things, you would change? Please, please, tell me, Jamie. ^_^o I really have to work on my vocabulary hard too. There are always so many words, which would be fitting much better or I can´t express the things I want to say at all. Please, I would really appreciate any help from you, if you might have a little time!
Wow, I was really amazed. O.O So many stupid mistakes in such a little text. *sweatdrop* And, there were so many dumb slips, it´s absolutly not funny anymore. ^^°°°° Like, where or had and has. These are things, I´m really not allowed to mix up anymore. ^^° And, God, please burn "a" and "an" into my brain already. >.<
Thank you so very, very much for your effort, Jamie!!! That was really great! Thanks to you, I could finally eliminate all these dumb mistakes. And, I read your suggestions very carefully, and edited the text after them. You were really right! And, a few very, very small parts were changed too.
Nya, they weren't stupid mistakes! They were all very small, and I was just pointing them out since they're easy to fix! ^_^ And nya, don't worry, English has a lot of weird irregular grammar things, I can't imagine having to remember all of them if I didn't already know! >.<
And you're welcome, I'm glad I was able to help, really! If you ever need anything, or have any questions, just email me, or find me on Yahoo, etc. XDDD
*huge hugs* ♥
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Really? To be honest, I really hadn´t thought to receive positive comments about the stories in the first place. More, that they would get ignored or wander in the category "yet another talentless wannabe-story-teller". But, that one of the best writers out there is really thinking like this, is really flattering and encouraging. Just, in the case that I really should write more, I hope that you won´t regret it afterwards. *lol*
<3 <3 <3 Thank you, really! But, if you might have any critic, please, please feel free to tell me, will you?
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And honestly I really enjoyed these. There's a certain quality to your writing, an honestly and an earnestness that I really feel is missing a lot of the time with fanfiction. And I mean, there some word choice things and grammatical things that I personally would change, being a native speaker, but other than that the ideas flow really well, and I really found it enjoyable to read, and refreshing too, in a way. I agree with ssphilosophy too - you do have a really good feel for the characters, which really is the most important thing. *nodnod* Definitely keep writing! As much as you can! I have a feeling that the more you write, the easier it will be for you to feel comfortable in the language, etc. ^_^
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Nya, but, it´s really true! ♥ ^_^
Which words would you replace and were are the grammatical things, you would change? Please, please, tell me, Jamie. ^_^o I really have to work on my vocabulary hard too. There are always so many words, which would be fitting much better or I can´t express the things I want to say at all. Please, I would really appreciate any help from you, if you might have a little time!
Thank you so much!
*hugs*
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Thank you so very, very much for your effort, Jamie!!! That was really great! Thanks to you, I could finally eliminate all these dumb mistakes. And, I read your suggestions very carefully, and edited the text after them. You were really right! And, a few very, very small parts were changed too.
*glomps*
Thank you!!!!!!!!!
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And you're welcome, I'm glad I was able to help, really! If you ever need anything, or have any questions, just email me, or find me on Yahoo, etc. XDDD
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