Just how many TeniPuri sites have we by now? *lol* So, actually, this one is just TV Tokyo their site for the OVA and this is the official one
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Well I, for one, am very glad you dug those out and aired them for the world! I can't help admiring anyone who is willing to write something in a language other than their own (btw. what is your first language?)
I could still understand the meaning behind the story despite the grammatical errors. I do not think you are a bad storyteller at all - you clearly have a feel for character and what contributes to a good fic. You have the important parts there and the grammar issues could easily be taken care of by an English-speaking beta-reader, so this in no way counts as bad fic!
Anyway, this is your first attempt, and nobody gets it right first time. You should keep writing, and keep learning from it. If you do write anything more, I would happily talk you through language corrections if you'd like me to.
Oh my, there must be still so many in there. ^^° Every time, I tried to pick grammatical errors out, there are new ones. ~.~ And there are still so many, which I don´t notice at all. Gomen! Really! It has to be very painful to read through so many faults. m^.^m
I´m always very glad about every bit of help. Just, please, feel free to correct me, anytime!!! And thank you for it! ^_^v It´s the only way to learn, isn´t it? Making faults and try to correct them. ^^°
*hugs* And, thank you for your encouragement, too! ^_^v My first language is German. ^^
I can't help admiring anyone who is willing to write something in a language other than their own (btw. what is your first language?)
I could still understand the meaning behind the story despite the grammatical errors. I do not think you are a bad storyteller at all - you clearly have a feel for character and what contributes to a good fic. You have the important parts there and the grammar issues could easily be taken care of by an English-speaking beta-reader, so this in no way counts as bad fic!
Anyway, this is your first attempt, and nobody gets it right first time. You should keep writing, and keep learning from it. If you do write anything more, I would happily talk you through language corrections if you'd like me to.
ganbatte, ne d^_^b
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Oh my, there must be still so many in there. ^^° Every time, I tried to pick grammatical errors out, there are new ones. ~.~ And there are still so many, which I don´t notice at all. Gomen! Really! It has to be very painful to read through so many faults. m^.^m
I´m always very glad about every bit of help. Just, please, feel free to correct me, anytime!!! And thank you for it! ^_^v It´s the only way to learn, isn´t it? Making faults and try to correct them. ^^°
*hugs* And, thank you for your encouragement, too! ^_^v My first language is German. ^^
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(You realise you may have opened Pandora's Box now, letting me loose with the grammar whip? ^_~)
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Yeeeees, anytime, please!!! ^_~
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