"Blood Bargain" - an Urban Legends short story

[strannik01]

This story takes place in the same continuity as all the other "urban legends" stories (see tag above). As before, the characters are different, but the setting and the rules that govern the way magic works are the same. The vampires actually come from the story I wrote earlier, but I never got around to finishing it, so it was never posted.

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You're soon to be abandoned editor... woe is me ;-)

[randirogue]

Great start. Direct imagery. I need to take notes. :D

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[randirogue]

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[moj_oduvan4ik]

It is a very bright story. You combined things which are so different and usually don't go together.
I was scared for those two people, despite on their magic.

Are you going to write another story about the concert?

Thank you for the link! :-)