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We Can’t Keep Her - HL/SPN/SV - Immortal!Dean 'Verse

Sep 24, 2007 09:33

Title: We Can’t Keep Her
Author: Strangevisitor7
Beta: Thanks to Pen37 who not only beta'd but let me play some more with her Chloe.
Prompt: #89:She for crossovers100 My table is here
Rated: PG
Fandom: HL, Smallville and SPN: Immortal!Dean ‘verse
Characters: Sam and Dean Winchester, Duncan MacLeod and Chloe Sullivan
Disclaimer: The characters you know and love all ( Read more... )

immortal!dean, dean winchester, duncan macleod, supernatural, crossovers100, sam winchester, highlander, my fic, chloe sullivan, smallville

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pipersmum September 24 2007, 14:56:39 UTC

Absolutely loved it lol. The bit with the towel at the end so funny poor Chloe she was doing so well as well with her standing up to Dean and all!!

Typical of Dean though to say he doesn't want her around but then try to seduce her anyway. Chloe must be really strong minded to turn down Dean in nothing but a towel!!

I hope you write more to follow this soon I can't wait :)

strangevisitor7 September 24 2007, 15:46:23 UTC

Dean without his towel. Wait ... what was I saying? Right. Glad I could make you laugh.

Dean can turn any situation to his advantage but Chloe isn't like any other girl, is she. More story to come but first Chloe has to regain her composure.

sixpacschic September 24 2007, 17:07:49 UTC

Hilarious! Towel drops are always good. More soon!

strangevisitor7 September 24 2007, 17:22:58 UTC

Thanks. I love writing the funny

pen37 September 24 2007, 17:40:50 UTC

LOL! Three cheers for Horndog!Dean. BTw, may I link this from my website?

strangevisitor7 September 24 2007, 18:01:23 UTC

Of course - I would love it if you linked in. And look I finally got myself a chlean icon. whoo hoo

idontlikegravy September 24 2007, 20:55:39 UTC

You made me LOL XD

Just one little typo I noticed hun, (sorry I can't switch off beta-mode *grin*) I think the towel should be in her 'hand'? :)

This was great fun, I can't wait to read the rest.

strangevisitor7 September 24 2007, 21:06:16 UTC

*giggles* back. No never turn the beta off. Thanks!

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strangevisitor7 September 25 2007, 00:53:44 UTC

Thank you so much. Your Two guys series was the first Chlean I ever read. So it means a lot that you think I can keep up with you and Pen37. *blushes furiously*

You guys have made Chlean my OTP.

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strangevisitor7 September 25 2007, 01:52:10 UTC

Wow Thanks. I know what you mean. I keep meaning to go back and catch your Martha/John stuff - so much to read so little time.

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