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leskuh January 25 2009, 20:36:30 UTC
COMMENT.

(also i'm like super lucky, because i just randomly got on to peek around at my flist)

I'll be back tomorrow-ish! :3

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strange_tomato January 25 2009, 20:42:16 UTC
Sure you did. You've actually been lurking around all weekend, waiting for me to update, right? :P You can't fool me.

I'll "see" you tomorrow, then.

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leskuh January 28 2009, 04:53:45 UTC
Woohoo! NAKED FRANNY! Best opening EVER ( ... )

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missgan January 25 2009, 20:53:32 UTC
Brilliant! :D

Frances & Beau, together at last! I'm so glad for the 2 of them, it's about time that they had someone special who returns their affection in their lives!
And yes, Frances, it's time to tell your father about who you really are, & what you really want. Some things are really too precious to lose. Good luck!

Oh yea, I couldn't decide on my favourite part of the update - it's a tie between Beau & Ripp's perverse dance-off & the kiss! :D

Looking forward to part two already!

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strange_tomato January 26 2009, 00:04:25 UTC
Thanks. :) This one was a lot of fun to do, with all the physical humour (Beau just seems to bring that into the story ( ... )

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fafy94 January 25 2009, 20:59:36 UTC
Nice update! Finally Beau and Frances fall in love!!! The best parts is this:

"I have a tiny penis."
"Pardon?"

This makes me laugh so hard A_A One of the best scene ever! And i love Lucy, she's too funny! Can't wait for more!

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strange_tomato January 26 2009, 00:16:37 UTC
Thanks. :) I don't know if I'd call it love yet. Maybe pre-love? They've definitely fallen for each other, though, it that sort of love-at-first-sight way (especially for Beau) that doesn't actually seem to happen all that often. Frances got swept off his feet.

Heheh. You liked that, huh? I've actually had that exact conversation with a guy, and I had only known him for a short time too. It was weird. (I went on the discover that it was pretty accurate. *snicker*)

I'm glad you found it funny. This update was all sap and humour, so I was counting on that. :P Lucy has to be funny in her own right if she's Beau's BFF, right? She's no slouch.

Thanks. :) I will try to adhere to my (more or less) biweekly plan.

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cindyanne1 January 25 2009, 21:03:01 UTC
SQUEE!!!!

Can I love Frances and Beau any more than I do? They are just too perfect! *sighs contentedly*

I loved the paintings, etc. of Jill done by Buck... and also all the interaction among the Fine Arts students. :D They really have a sort of a community there, don't they? I could really feel Frances' awkwardness but at the same time the desire to be part of them. :)

I of course will read no matter how often you update, but the more you want to update the better, lol!

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strange_tomato January 26 2009, 14:30:25 UTC
Awww, thanks. ^_^ I like to see squee-age.

The custom paintings are so much fun that way. It's such an easy way to add a personal touch to the game and a story (especially when you have a SUPER AWESOME collaborator who makes artworks for you on request). I play up the Fine Arts building because I actually know a thing or two about it (makes sense, right?), and it is a way to link some of the characters.

Frances seems like he'd be reluctant to try to get in with a group of people like that, but he seems to be enjoying it too. Beau will be good for countering his introverted tendencies.

Heheh. Thanks. :) I think it's more fun with momentum. I know I was more excited and inspired when I was updating every week, and it keeps people interested. If it comes down to it, I'll just make the updates shorter, like they used to be. I can always break them into parts too.

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anonymous January 25 2009, 21:09:01 UTC
/FUCK/ /YES/ !!!

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strange_tomato January 26 2009, 14:34:21 UTC
*pumps fist*

Yes, these are my sort of words of approval. Thank you!

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