Fic: Towards the Next Great Adventure

May 30, 2011 15:29

Title: Towards the Next Great Adventure
Fandoms: Doctor Who
Characters: TenII, Rose Tyler
Rating: All ages
Spoilers: none
Wordcount: 1052
Summary: This shouldn't be the hard part.
Author's notes: This started off as a scene within another fic I am writing ... and then I realized it wanted to be its own fic, as it had its own story to tell =)

Onwards... )

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zazie11 May 31 2011, 20:19:13 UTC
Last of the almost-but-not-quite-Time Lords, defeated by a glorified spark plug.
-- Lol!

The Doctor closed his eyes at the thought, raking his fingers across his face and feeling the oh-so-human stubble beginning to grow across his chin. He paused, marveling at the odd sensation. He hadn’t yet gotten used to that ... he wasn’t sure he ever would.
-- I like the line of thought you have in this fic, beginning here, about all of the elements - physical and emotional - that this Doctor needs to adapt to/come terms with the limitations of.

He wanted to smile and reassure her, put on an easy grin, make a flippant remark or a joke - and then change the subject to anything else.
-- I want to tell him that wasn't the best way to handle it before, either! ;)

"What if I can't?" he said quietly, flatly, lips becoming even more taut over the words. He felt a tightness in his chest and realized he was holding his breath. He didn’t want to know her reaction … he didn’t need …

Rose tightened her arms around him and brought her head to his shoulder. "You can. You always can. I believe in you," she whispered.
-- <333!

She stood and held out her hand to him. "Come with me,"
-- ISWYDT ;)

I like that Rose supports him when he's doubting himself. She doesn't even need to know the whole of his worries - she just believes in him and gives him strength.

Beautiful, simple moment - I can see why you wanted it to exist as a stand-alone, as you mention, above.

:D

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strange_charmed May 31 2011, 23:09:55 UTC
Last of the almost-but-not-quite-Time Lords, defeated by a glorified spark plug.
-- Lol!

I had a feeling that you'd manage to pick out my favorite line in here - good to see my confidence wasn't misplaced haha! Also note the lack of a toaster-moment - he can fix it, but it's a moral thing not an ability thing! Ngl, I had our conversation in mind as I was writing that =)

Glad you liked it! =)

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zazie11 June 2 2011, 21:10:46 UTC
I had a feeling that you'd manage to pick out my favorite line in here - good to see my confidence wasn't misplaced haha!

- Never doubt! ;) Besides, it really IS a great line!

Thank you for the lack 'o' toaster incompetence - oh, you know me well.

Ngl, I had our conversation in mind as I was writing that That's kind of awesome.

:D

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strange_charmed June 3 2011, 02:30:18 UTC
Thank you for the lack 'o' toaster incompetence - oh, you know me well.

Heh, re fic and fanon at least, I'd better!! XD

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