Now What? ~ Chapter Ten ~ Final Chapter ~ ''Darkness & Light''

[storyteller1010]

After some time, the door opened, and I heard footsteps before something hit the floor and the person who came runned to me.
''Alice? Alice! Alice?!''
I could hear Eric's panicked voice echoing in the hallway but it seemed so distant. He grabbed my left arm and shooked it slightly, but since I didn't show any signs of life he pressed two of his

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[marijuly12]

Oh Crap!!!!! For some reason my comment was posted in an anonymous way!!!! And Trust me these stories are by far more importantly than the class... I'm amused by the fact that you are one of my only friends (if I have the honor to call you that) that uses Windows XP, and likes it.

I'm also reposting because I just read all your story to my BFF Adriana. She was in the hospital and I got here earlier and showed her your story. (Hope you don't mind.) Her OI, isn't gettin better, but she is still smiling and as happy as ever. Oh! She says that its a good thing you did not kill Alice, cause she sees herself in her (I don't understand that part, and she just giggles everytime I ask her), and She is real glad that she ended up with Matt. She said that Every girl need that kind of faery tail love tale, and that Alice deserved it more. She also says that you forgot to add if Alice ever made up with her parents.

But WE want to know what happens next.

Hope you keep on being as happy as ever, and that your talent matures into greatness!!!!

Lots of Love,

MariJuly & Adriana

[storyteller1010]

Oh, so that was you!

Haha, well, I'm glad you think like that!

As far as I'm concerned, we're friends. :)
LOL, why is everyone so much against Windows XP?! It's awesome! :D

Oh! I'm really glad she likes my story and of course I don't mind! I'm especially glad to hear she sees herself in Alice. It means that I've succeded in my task. And, trust me, I see myself in Alice too and it's really hard to explain it to someone healthy. Tell her I said hi and that I hope she'll feel better soon because OI can really be a drag and suck at some time, I know how she feels. I'm really surprised at how strong she is. To be honest, I'm not as strong as her and I have my "moods" where I cry and think why life is so unfair. It seems to be better with age, but I still couldn't manage to be happy and smiling always. She has my deepest regards and I really envy her on her strong personallity and spirit. I hope she'll be okay in the end because every person as strong & good as her deserves a happy ending. Maybe one like Alice did. (;
About the parents... Well, it's really up to you to decide if she did or didn't. That's why I left that part out. Some people wouldn't be happy if she didn't and some wouldn't be happy if she did. I left for you to fill that little part in, and be happy with the result you make. (:

Well, I thought about a seqeul, but I'm not really sure. I have some ideas in my head, and if I manage to put 'em on a paper and be happy with the result, you may hear about Alice more. I'm really torned up about it, because everything has to end and Alice's got her happy ending. I'm thinking about "The Next Generation" type of seqeuel. Maybe a story about her child or somethin' like that. We'll see. I can't promise anything.

But what I can promise is that another story will soon surface out. I'm not gonna tell anything, but you can count you'll read another one of my stories soon. School started and I really want to make an effort and pass with a good grade, so it will take some of my time. But I'll manage to put something up for sure. ^^

Thank you! (: