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storyfan

Fic: Bertie and the Delicious Memory

Jul 27, 2009 01:25

I wrote this story in March and only posted it on IndeedSir. I'd forgotten about it until now, and I just wanted to have it on my own LJ, too. I'm quite sure everyone on my flist has seen this thing, so there's no need at all to comment. I am not whoring for comments, I promise! Really, I'm not!

( A little fic written long ago )

fluff, jeeves/wooster, nc-17, fan fiction

Comments 22

queen_fiend July 27 2009, 06:30:25 UTC

That was cute! I missed it the first time around, so I'm glad you posted it in your journal. :) I wish I had discovered Wodehouse and the fandom much earlier!

storyfan July 27 2009, 12:41:36 UTC

This was one of my earliest efforts. Thanks for reading it. A few of us keep talking about archiving all of the IndeedSir stories, but we just are not sure about the best way to do it. And finding the time to do it is tough, too.

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storyfan June 26 2010, 02:25:23 UTC

Oh, yes. There's a link to an archive on Indeed Sir, created by thirstyrobot. Not everything is in it yet, though. JWfics, I think the link says.

waqaychay July 27 2009, 12:01:58 UTC

oh, baby, you know what i like. ;D

storyfan July 27 2009, 12:40:08 UTC

Don't I just!

triedunture July 28 2009, 00:03:27 UTC

This icon is win. And so is this lovely blast from the past fic.

storyfan July 28 2009, 02:09:01 UTC

Thank you. Seems odd to read it again after so long.

feanix July 27 2009, 12:45:23 UTC

Love it!

I can see Bertie standing there, his mouth agape with Jeeves trying to get his attention...*crickets*

Love Jeeves begging ;) Hawt.

storyfan July 27 2009, 12:52:04 UTC

Mouth agape and probably drooling. Lovely. Thanks for reading this. It's an old piece, written B.C. - before chaoschick13 became my beta. But sabinelagrande is an excellent beta, too. I had quite a few problems with this and she sorted them out for me.

sige_vic July 27 2009, 20:23:41 UTC

Re-read it with a great pleasure :-)

storyfan July 28 2009, 02:09:36 UTC

I love your icon - so cute! And thanks for re-reading.

janeturenne July 27 2009, 22:28:52 UTC

I hadn't seen it! And I'm very, very glad I have now :) Oddly enough, I loved the scenes in the kitchen even more than those in the bedroom, probably because the aspect of the forbidden and dangerous that comes of kissing with an aunt looming on the horizon makes everything ten times sexier. Not that the rest wasn't delicious too. I particularly loved this:

Well, not jibbering. Jeeves neither jibbered nor jabbered. His pleadings of “more,” and “again,” and “I love you” were always enunciated in clear King’s English.

...which is sweet and hot and hilarious all at once. Well done you!

storyfan July 28 2009, 02:11:49 UTC

Thank you for the lovely compliments. You know, at first I had Queen's English, but my beta reminded me that they had a King in those days. A good catch, that.