Unbalance (Part 1)

[stormy_words]

Title: Unbalance
Author:saturn_necklace/stormy_words
Pairing/group: Ohno/Nino, Arashi
Word count: 16,000
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU (Historical/fantasy)
Warnings: British English.
Summary: Nino, Ohno, Sho, Aiba and Jun live in a small town in the mountains. They live normal lives until suddenly everything they've ever known changes.
AN: Originally posted here at je_holiday for lady_gemma. Now that

Comments

[bclar]

I think there's a part missing... one moment, they're talking to Fujita, the next they're on horses in the woods. Could you fix it? It's such a nice story, I don't want to miss a thing (beware of unfunny pointers towards clichéed ballads).

[saturn_necklace]

It should be fixed now. It seems like one of the html tags was broken, so it cut a chunk out o:

[bclar]

Thanks! ^__^

[satoshitomi]

asdfaljkfeljg.

YOU REALLY MAKE ME SPEECHLESS.

:D:D:D

I ♥ YOU. :D

[akatsuki360]

i want more!!
lol gomen for my rudeness DX
but this is so good!!