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[stoptouchingme]

I wrote a very short story at work on wednesday.  here it is.

A midday city sky. Walking alonge, the clouds began to fall liquescently. They seemed very sad about it, so I joined them. i began to fall liquescanetly too. The clouds and myself, turning ourselves to water drops.
A girl walked to me, safely shielded from the falling

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[wheniwasalive]

There was anarchy in her eyes, and you were too passive, letting the clouds lead you away. You saw only your imagination and she looked at you through reality.

[stoptouchingme]

is that a song lyric, or your opinion? its strange how you place the blame on the main character. what if i had switch i and she with i and he?

[wheniwasalive]

It's my opinion and I would have said the same thing for that's what your story made me think of. Isn't it a good thing when your stories make people think about character analyzation? or whatever, atleast think something at all.

[stoptouchingme]

no no definitely. thank you very much for your input and opinion, i was just wondering if it was a gender issue. thank you for thinking

[wheniwasalive]

I hate the idea of gender. It fucks everything up.

[stoptouchingme]

i pretty much agree. i thought maybe a girl would blame the main character because its implied hes a guy, and maybe if the roles were switched it would be different.

[wheniwasalive]

But do you think you would allow yourself to let the main male character, if the roles were switched, to blame the female character for crying on female emotional issues that many people do in real life. Would that be why he didn't get it? Things in life would be better if these thoughts didn't exist, but pms commercials tell us otherwise. Whatever, I have too much to say about everything right now. you should IM me sometime, to discuss shit, my sn is nunsinfires.