Fic: i-80 west, part six (Brittany/Santana, R)

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Title: i-80 west, part six
Characters: Brittany, Mike, Brittany/Santana
Length: 8.5k
Rating: R
Summary: Brittany and Santana graduate high school and spend one last summer in Lima before leaving for college.
A/N: Super thanks, as always, to JJ for giving me all the notes in the world about Utah and going above and beyond in beta duties in helping me

Comments

[devilduckieee]

I love the way you wrote Brittany figuring things out. How she understands things so completely about Santana, but maybe doesn't always know the reason why she's doing something. So that moment of realization that hits her at the car, when Brittany's looking at the ring in the cup holder, that was so great. It was that Oh! moment where everything clicked and we got to experience Brittany (kind of sort of) rolling her eyes at Santana, like: oh you silly precious dear, don't you know I'm going to be with you forever and then some? But she gets it and gets it in such a Brittany way. I love that she calls Mike and Mike is like 'what?!' But it's perfect 'cause Brittany wasn't really calling Mike for any reason other than to just voice her thoughts. And, yeah, I really liked that.

Meghan can go diaf. {cough} I'm a wee bit protective of Britt and her feelings. But whatever, good Capitalism means taking money from a paying customer, no matter race, religion or sexual preference. Dammit Meghan, don't you want your business to survive? Obviously not! It's inevitable Meghan! Get with the times Meghan! You'll go out of business if you wont sell The Gays any of The Rings. Okay, I'm getting sidetracked. But, I liked that even though you never really said it directly, you showed us that Brittany was understanding (kinda) what Santana was thinking about the whole ring thing. How, even though they don't need rings, there is something nice about the idea of them. (even if they're from cracker jack boxes or ring pops 'cause ... preeeessshhh)

I've been rambling, sorry. I just want them back with each other now please? ;)

Great job, can't wait to see what's next. ♥

[stopstartstall]

Okay so I thought I replied to your comment but apparently I hadn't. Duh me. Thanks you! I'm glad you liked the realisation moment, I thought it was important to see things from Brittany's pov, so I'm glad you thought it worked.

Meghan was a necessary evil unfortunately, but yeah her business is gonna fail so who cares anyway? :D

Thanks for reading as always! I'll hopefully have the next part up soon and our girls can get back together. ;)