fanfic: Dollhouse

[stop_theworld]

Title: Don't tell me what you've done
Fandom/pairing: Dollhouse ; Adelle ; semi-Adelle/Dominic
Word count: 1300-ish
Spoilers: Through “A Spy in the House of Love.” Inspired by the description for the upcoming episode, but not spoiler-y.
Notes: Title and section titles from the lyrics of Cursive’s “We’re Going To Hell”, uploaded here. I recommend

Comments

[stop_theworld]

♥! Thank you so much! Your feedback means a lot to me. I'm so glad it worked for you.

[miss_atom]

You rock my boat. This was great, I loved your idea of the attic! And I really love how you wrote about what she feels towards Dominic :D

♥ ♥

[stop_theworld]

Thank you Kellylove! ♥ It was fun deciding what my vision of the Attic would be. I'm so curious how it'll end up on the show.

seriously

[anonymous]

i can't believe you haven't gotten more responses because this is awesome. absolutely perfect. your description of the attic is so much better than any others i've read.

bravo.

Re: seriously

[stop_theworld]

Thank you so much! This made my day.

[everypoembreaks]

I adore this. Your depiction of Adelle is wonderful.

[stop_theworld]

Thank you!

[gryfndor_godess]

I really like the contrast you show between Dominic's lie and the Roger lie. I also really like the "sucker punch" line. It is creepy and disturbing that he can't even kiss her back. This paragraph is awesome:
(At her side for three years, and never once a lapse; never a stray touch or a centimeter lost between them. Three years that were meant to stretch into the interminable; she had her iron crown of control in place and she would never have wavered, not once. A waste.)

Well done!

[stop_theworld]

Thank you so much!