I Know I Am But Summer To Your Heart, by Nos (posted at 1:10 am EST)

[nos4a2no9]

Title: I Know I Am But Summer To Your Heart
Author: nos4a2no9
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski
Length: 2830 words
Prompt: leaves
Notes: Many thanks to meresy and malnpudl for detailed, fast and exceptionally savvy beta work. I couldn’t have done it without you, chicas! The title is shamelessly stolen from one of Edna St. Vincent Millay's brilliant works. No limbs

Comments

[lamentables]

Yay! Porn Before Breakfast.
Also your prompt has made me want to write.
OK, now I'll go read the PBB.

[lamentables]

*sigh*

That's lovely. Lots of heat and tension and then the quiet pay-off.

[nos4a2no9]

Thank you kindly, hon! I'm glad you enjoyed your PBB!

[j_s_cavalcante]

Awwwww! This is wonderful! A very refreshing and original take on them, and yet still so them. Oh, Fraser! You had me feeling nearly as frustrated as Ray must have felt, all because Fraser wouldn't spit the words out.

He’d been first in the heart of someone else only once. And she had died of a gunshot wound in 1967.

Ouch! Yeah, that's kind of it, right there. *sniffles*

Very hot first time, and GTO SEX and...Fraser, even doing it in a men's room, despite the potential consequences all around. He doesn't have any sense of proportion, our Fraser. :)

I LOVE this. Go, you! \o/

[nos4a2no9]

Thank you, JS! And thanks for the typo catches! :-)

[j_s_cavalcante]

You're welcome. For the diction catch, anyway. Because you've introduced a new typo. It's "wreak." No C. :)

*loves you much*

[nos4a2no9]

*headdesk* That's it - I give up! Clearly I'm not cut out for this writing thing. I suppose I'll take up the pan flute or something to work out some of my creative energy. *shuffles off*

[omphale23]

We all want things we can't have, or that we shouldn't, or that we don't think we deserve, or that seem like a terrible, terrible risk. Fraser thinks of the big things, the ones that change his life, in poetry. Ray just wants someone to tell him what he's allowed to ask for. I love that he can ask for the world, which is rare and wonderful and a celebration all on its own.

And this is two fics in a row of yours that have made me cry.

♥ them. And you. *g*

[nos4a2no9]

♥

Dude, you cry easy! And yet you have such a prickly exterior! (Not really. You're actually very soft and squishable). But, um, yes. What you said? That was exactly what I was going for.

[waltzforanight]

GUH, GTO sex. *fans self*

I really enjoyed this. ♥

[nos4a2no9]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

[ximeria]

Mmm, best way to wake up in the morning *g*
Lovely piece and all the hotter because Fraser really worries too much *g*

[nos4a2no9]

You're right - Fraser really does worry too much. He needs to relax! And I think Ray can help him out with that... :-)

Thanks for commenting!