Territory, by Ultra_Chrome.

[ultra_chrome]

Title:Territory
Author: ultra_chrome
Pairing: F/K because they’re just so pretty together.
Rating: NC-17
Kink: Rough sex!
Notes: llassah is a legend!Of legendary proportions. This would be a mess without her. If it still is, it's all my fault, because I had to dash off to work.

Comments

[somewhatdeluded]

psst! if you haven't left for work yet, your html is b0rked...

*reads*

[ultra_chrome]

Yeah, saw that....freaked out and sorted it. Now I'm late. *sigh*

[somewhatdeluded]

Awww. :( I'm sorry. I hate it when LJ html breaks, and then you have to spend like forevers tracking it down and it invariably turns out to be something stupid (my usual error is "")...

Stupid internets.

ANYWAY! I pretty much started cackling here:

There were probably better words for it, like scary (for a while there) and intense, maybe even fucked up, but those words don’t cover it all. Wow does. So… wow!

...and continued to do so here and there throughout. You got funny in your porn! Yay!

“It’s nice being noticed with you in a room. That doesn’t happen much.” And “You know he’s the second hottest guy that’s ever come on to me. Good thing I’m fucking the first.”

Oh, *Ray*. This is the perfect combination of sweetness and competitiveness, and it just sounds like him, and I love his oblique little compliments, how he's being bitchy and nice all at once.

“’Cause this, Frase? This is like schoolyard bully stuff. This is child’s play. You wanna rough me up; you need to do it like a man.”

*head explodes*

Ray didn’t know

[ultra_chrome]

Hehe, guess what the problem was? Yeah, the cut. I just retyped it and Bob was my uncle.

I have to admit I was inspired about the poodle thing by an actual poodlenapping that happened here. Yes, they were found in a skip, or dumpster.

The rest? Well, Ray and Fraser are just so darn inspiring. :)

Thanks for the heads up and the blush making feedback.

[elementalv]

[whimpers]

Who knew bitey!Fraser could be so damn hot? Very nice indeed. Also very nice? Ray goading Fraser to go even further, and yes, a hint of breath play and sex against the wall and, yeah.

It's a shame that tentacle porn isn't on the list -- I could have made a case for doing a missing scene from that BSG thing with Fraser and Leoben and special attachments for the Cylons. Hm. Another time.

[ultra_chrome]

I knew bitey!fraser would be hot. That's why I wanted to write it. And Ray just doesn't know when to stop, does he? One more reason to adore him.

Another time for the tentacle porn? How about right after you finish this thing? I want to see what comes out of Leoben's pants.

[ultra_chrome]

Thanks. :)

[omphale23]

Okay, so this was bound to be hot, because I love this kink. But wow.

“Ray.” That was a warning there. Low and almost hoarse. Ray wasn’t intimidated. Much.
“You wanna rough me up some, Fraser, you gotta do better than this.”

Even the dialogue is hot and fantastic. You are awesome. I love this.

[ultra_chrome]

Yeah, I love me a bit of rough stuff with these boys, so I couldn't resist the prompt.

So glad you like the dialogue. Sometimes I worry that I don't have Ray happening right in my head. :)

[mickeymvt]

Hummina-hummina. I really like alpha and possessive Fraser.

[ultra_chrome]

Mmmm me too. :)