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Caught by shoemaster

Jan 26, 2007 20:57

Title: Caught
Author: shoemaster/Allison
Pairing: Fraser/Kowalski/OFC
Kink: threesome
Length: 1500 words
Notes: Owed largely to etben who answered key questions and kalpurna who sat on my floor and made me write so we can eat dinner. And then made edits when I passed her my laptop \o/

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Comments 38

pearl_o January 27 2007, 03:10:52 UTC

Okay, I have a total undeniable love for this kink any way you do it, so this was very YAY.

She was a very forward woman, and Fraser greatly admired her for it.

EEEEEEE YAY.

shoemaster January 27 2007, 05:37:30 UTC

Yeah, this one has been percolating since like October. And yeah, I'm a fan myself so YAY.

Glad you enjoyed it!

brooklinegirl January 27 2007, 03:20:42 UTC

okay, wow, god, that was hot. Just - I have such a KINK for Fraser watching Ray fuck girls, and you get that AND Fraser getting to get all involved, and god, when he reaches down and realizes it's Ray sucking his cock? SO desperately hot.

wonderful stuff. YAY.

shoemaster January 27 2007, 05:52:05 UTC

Dude, thank you, I find myself weirdly disconnected when writing the porn, so hearing 'yeah that's hot' is good because I'm like "Is it? Is it really?" so, uh, thanks :D

kristiinthedark January 27 2007, 03:48:00 UTC

Really, really, REALLY loved Fraser finding out it's Ray instead of the woman. GUH.

shoemaster January 27 2007, 06:22:24 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it.

mickeymvt January 27 2007, 04:07:39 UTC

Fraser watching Ray fuck a girl and getting off on it is so hot I forgot how freakin' cold I am. *shivers in a good way*

shoemaster January 27 2007, 05:53:41 UTC

Anything to help!

slidellra January 27 2007, 05:23:07 UTC

Oh golly. That's some mighty effective porn there. I love your clean, direct Fraser voice and the unbearable hotness of the escalating Ray/Fraser touches.

The scrape of Ray’s stubble against cheek and neck made him shiver; it’d been too long since he last felt that while engaged in a kiss.

And this while he's kissing the chick! Yes. Oh, yes. Wonderful

shoemaster January 27 2007, 06:01:56 UTC

That's what I strive for, you know, the effective porn.

Thank you kindly, dear!