Question for you Grammatical Gurus
Poll How to make this sentence read properly:
As a thank you for the use of your Brain Meat, I bring you this song. Hee!
omg, my sweet Utah family is going to never ever forgive me for this book I'm writing. Ferserioz.
ETA: go to femmenerd's LJ and write her Rupert Grint RPF so I can read it, too. No, I meant that last part.
[ETA 2] GOT IT!! Thank you - the sentence will be completely re-worded, thanks.
As a thank you for the use of your Brain Meat, I bring you this song. Hee!
omg, my sweet Utah family is going to never ever forgive me for this book I'm writing. Ferserioz.
ETA: go to femmenerd's LJ and write her Rupert Grint RPF so I can read it, too. No, I meant that last part.
[ETA 2] GOT IT!! Thank you - the sentence will be completely re-worded, thanks.