Argh...
Argh, I say!
But first... Happy happy to mongo42! Many happy returns of the day, my friend!
And then... you know what's aggrevating? Figuring out the main driving force for a story's main character... when you're about 70% of the way into it.
You know what's excellent? Figuring out the main driving force for a story's main character... before you've finished it.
Finally, Sia's got a reasonable, solid reason for embarking on her quest... because it starts out as something much more reasonable for her to begin. And more than that, a reason for continuing it, as it clearly becomes something that should be way, way outside her abilities.
Now, I just need to completely re-write the start of this darn thing. Which is OK (ish), because I've been wanting to de-shuffle it from flash-back laced, to contiguous.
But first... Happy happy to mongo42! Many happy returns of the day, my friend!
And then... you know what's aggrevating? Figuring out the main driving force for a story's main character... when you're about 70% of the way into it.
You know what's excellent? Figuring out the main driving force for a story's main character... before you've finished it.
Finally, Sia's got a reasonable, solid reason for embarking on her quest... because it starts out as something much more reasonable for her to begin. And more than that, a reason for continuing it, as it clearly becomes something that should be way, way outside her abilities.
Now, I just need to completely re-write the start of this darn thing. Which is OK (ish), because I've been wanting to de-shuffle it from flash-back laced, to contiguous.