Come Hither - An H/G Story for the Fortune Cookie Challenge

[stmargarets]

TITLE: Come Hither
RATING: PG-13
SUMMARY: Ginny wants to take their relationship to the next level.
WORD COUNT: 2,000 *polishes word count halo*
A/N: This was written for the Fortune Cookie Challenge(http://community.livejournal.com/hpgw_otp/52837.html). It isn’t due until August 15, but I’

Comments

[girlspell]

Oh what a sweetheart of a story!

I'm not saying anymore.. It's just too good

[stmargarets]

I had so much fun with all of the girly dress details! Thanks for reading.

[rdprice29]

HOORAY! What a wonderful new story from you!!!

Awesome job!

[stmargarets]

It's Flufffff with a capital "F" and a few more at the end just for effect. :) Thanks for reading!

[daksian]

Oh well done Mary! I loved the conversation underneath the conversation...if you know what I mean. :P It was so touching...so right.

Ginny is beautiful, but like so many of us (men and women alike), she sometimes can't see it for herself, and needs something like that little black robe to view herself properly...and to have that view confirmed by the reaction of her lover.

Lovely.

[stmargarets]

I'm glad the conversation under the conversation (good way of putting it, btw) wasn't too subtle to be noticed. And it's true about finding the right thing to wear - it can make a difference, but only if those feelings were there in the first place. Thanks for reading!

[lunalovepotter]

This was just lovely! Absolutely perfect.

[stmargarets]

Oh, thanks for reading! I'm always relieved when I can check this challenges off of the list.

[megan29]

You're so good at these scenes! I think I would've skipped a story with that prompt from anyone else, but not from you - and I was right! You always put a smile on my face. Ginny's musings about Days of Destiny were really great! And I like that she didn't play coy and wait for Harry to make a move, but told him straight out that she was dressed for seduction! Heee, much more in character that way.

[stmargarets]

LOL - you can never be too careful with the messages you send to Harry. Overt is best, I think! Thanks for reading. I'm glad you're smiling. You've had a rough few weeks.