The New Zealand Chronicles: Part IV, Chapter Twenty-Six

[stmargarets]

Title: Chapter Twenty-Six: Spectacular Mistakes
Word Count: 5,789
Warnings:unbeta’d

I had the worst time with this chapter! Uh. These realization moments are so hard to write.

Comments

[rdprice29]

*humph* My husband has the same habit of storing his clothes on the floor too, lol!

You posting an update is truly the highlight of my week. :D This chapter is fantabulous as usual.

Poor Hezzie. I can't wait to see what happens with her/Niall/Kenny. Hezzie seems so level headed and head on and true, the issue that drove her and Kenny apart seems so out of character for her. But I guess we're seeing her at the end of a painfully hard lesson. *hugs Hezzie*

You know, before you posted this chapter, I was thinking about the story a day or so ago, and was thinking that things were going really well for Ginny and that something bad was probably going to happen soon. I was thinking of something a lot worse than her flying sequence not working out, but I much prefer how you wrote it than having to deal with her mistake injuring someone on the bus or with the ambulance. The subsequent conversation with Harry was excellent and is one of the reasons why I love your work so, so much. I liked how you finally had Ginny open up to him, and how he was so understanding and supportive. Great job!

There's more I could write, but I just adored the entire chapter. Fantastic job!

[stmargarets]

You know, after I told you I was almost done - I hit a snag - as Dumbledore would say. LOL - but at least it's done and it makes sense. Yes, you can't have sunlit days everyday - so you were right to anticipate a bit of trouble. I'm glad you liked the conversation - that was the tough part - to make it realistic and in character. Thanks for reading!