Always Attract (Part 97)

Oct 08, 2012 20:49

A/N: A couple of notes: 1) There's only three chapters left after this one, so Chapter 100 will be its last and 2) I'm not sure how long it will take to get the next chapter out. It should be pretty straight forward so hopefully not too long. I am also going to be going back and cleaning the whole thing up simultaneously so that way when I post the ( Read more... )

fic: always attract

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sigh passionate_hope October 9 2012, 03:02:18 UTC
the mark of a good story is one that is able to draw you in no matter how long the time between chapters. This, Tammy, falls into taht category witbhout fail. I always love coming baxk to this one and you never disappoint. Wow 3 chapter left! that seems almost perfect and yet sad too because it's been such a long journey to the end. to know it's finally near makes it all the real. Oh and i will definitely be in line for a pdf of it when it's done!

Now to the chapter! first off that family at the beginning...i hada sinking feeling when i started that this was not going to end well. Sadly Luke learned the hard way that some peoople really are just in it for the money. terrible thing isn't it? Poor Luke, it's hard enough for him to have to let Prewitt go; but to encounter people like that too :( sad eyes.

Love how caring Luke and Reid are with each other though. That never gets old. Reid's immediate instinct to comfort Luke make's me smile. and how obvious that they both love that baby :) both of their little conversations with prewitt, overheard on the baby monitor lol were adorable and awww.

I liked Reid's interaction with the peterson's too and how though they seemed perfect he was uneasy. and he realized why when he got home; Luke saying he missed him was so sweet and so perfect. but enough gushing lol i love this world you created and will miss it when you are done with it. great stuff Tammy, i have a feeling Luke is going to broach the topic of keeping baby prewitt again. can't wait to see what happens in the next three chapters :)

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Re: sigh stl29tide October 9 2012, 06:53:47 UTC
Luke is kind of going to bring up keeping Prewitt with Reid, but it's not really going to come to a head until something else happens that will cause Luke to sort of step up and take charge of the situation.

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Re: sigh passionate_hope October 18 2012, 22:26:51 UTC
ooooh that sounds intriguing... i'm all for Luke taking charge can't wait to see how you end up ending this tammy

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