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stinger_d86

The First Chapters

Mar 24, 2006 18:00

I give you now the first story arc for The Dragon of Mysterym with updates. I hope you like it.
Please tell me what you think and point out any errors.
( Chapter 1 )

Comments 4

Awesome anonymous March 24 2006, 20:49:18 UTC

This is Polly Dumfa from the Flipside forums, I think this great! I can't wait to hear the end, your such a good storyteller.

Re: Awesome stinger_d86 March 24 2006, 21:12:53 UTC

thankee

SANDWICHES?! florn March 24 2006, 21:40:54 UTC

Ha, that's awesome, So you are Dragon of Mystery on the flipside forums then? Well hope you make more, I love it! ^_^

enviniminy May 3 2006, 23:52:02 UTC

Mm I like it! Very strong plotline so far and interesting twists. A few spelling mistakes, but nothing serious. Could use a few comma to fix awkward sentences. I like the clear distinction between charactors - many authors are unable of such a feat. You've definitely build yourself a good base to work on - I can't wait to read the next installment!