Fic: you are the stars

Nov 25, 2010 01:59

Title: you are the stars
Author: Mary (stillxmyxheart)
Beta: Lindsay (nylana)
Rating: G
Genre: Fluff
Word Count: 533
Characters: Rose/Ten
Disclaimer: Anything you recognize? Ain't mine.
Summary: He's not used to being afraid but things have been different ever since she changed.

A/N: Written for Challenge 58 at then_theres_us; more or less a sequel to we are stardust

She is a contradiction in every way. )

fic: doctor who, fic: pairing: rose tyler/ten, fic: all fic, fic: challenge fic

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happyfew November 25 2010, 17:53:13 UTC
I saw that you'd posted fic when I checked the internet on my phone in class, hardly restrained myself from flailing, and then I saw the sequel to we are stardust and actually fucking SCREAMED. And then I had to wait to get home to read it properly, and OMG, IT WAS SO WORTH THE WAIT.

Just as gorgeous as we are stardust, absolutely beautiful.

So many breathtaking parts;

Crimson droplets fly from her skin and he swears they shine as they fall, looking for all the world like tiny shooting stars streaking towards the city. The lights seem to shine brighter wherever the droplets hit and her smile widens. I love this image so much.

She is power and benevolence, strength and love, vengeance and compassion. She is a contradiction in every way. Favourite line out of all of this mindblowingly gorgeous fic.

He allows her to pull him out with her, apprehension flickering deep within him. He knows how to fly; he's just never done it without wings. This reminds me of Moulin Rouge, negl, which made me even happier than this line makes me on it's own. ♥

Her breath shimmers when she exhales, a stream of glittering vapor that runs the length of her palms and into the air, tumbling over the ends of her fingers like diamonds.

He watches as the glowing current swirls around them, above their heads and below their feet, and he takes a breath, inhaling some of her stardust, taking part of her essence and mixing it with his own.

You are the stars, he murmurs against her mouth, and she smiles.

IS THAT EVERY LINE? Just about. So much... *gets out thesaurus*... exquisite imagery here, I just... can't even believe how superb it is.

You know what is now my favourite fic of all time? This.

And you know who my favourite person is? (You should XD) You. ♥

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stillxmyxheart November 25 2010, 23:53:12 UTC
YOU ARE MY FAVORITE PERSON TOO, BB, I LOVE YOU ♥

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