Fic: forgetting how to breathe

[stillxmyxheart]

Title: forgetting how to breathe
Author: Mary (stillxmyxheart)
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Angst
Word Count: 551
Characters: Ten (Rose/Ten)
Disclaimer: Anything you recognize? Ain't mine.
Summary: As he has now are his memories.

A/N: For Challenge 16, Photos and Poems, at then_theres_us, prompt is behind the cut, as always :D

Comments

[00mina]

ANGSTY. I'LL HAVE NO MORE TEARS AFTER TODAY.

"She is everywhere, and she is nowhere."
THIS IS IT. YES.

[stillxmyxheart]

THANK YOU BB. I still haven't watched Waters of Mars, so I didn't read your reaction post, but your "cried like a motherless baby" thing cracked me the hell up.

I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT. I LOVE YOU, BB.

[00mina]

LOL I do tear up at everything. I'm thinking PMS. Only it's chronic, so I don't really know.

OF COURSE I DID. IT'S DELICIOUS. AND ANGSTY. I felt a bit for poor Doctor, because I kind of don't want him to suffer, but I don't want him to forget her either. I NEED SOME FLUFF PLZ, of the sugary-happy kind ;_;

[stillxmyxheart]

Eh, so do I XD SPN made me cry like a motherless baby tonight, so I think we're on the same level XD

I HAVE RECENT FLUFF THAT YOU HAVEN'T REVIEWED SO IDK IF YOU'VE READ IT *subtle hint is subtle*

[asahifirsa]

Very angsty *thumbs up*

[stillxmyxheart]

Hee, thanks! :D

[alizarin_skies]

So beautiful and angsty. The imagery is really lovely :)

[stillxmyxheart]

Thank you <3

[carly21]

Hurts... *sniffs and hugs imaginary Ten*
Beautiful but still hurts ;_;

[stillxmyxheart]

Thank you, bb <3

[teruel_a_witch]

Awww, so heart-wrenching but very beautiful and gorgeous, poor Ten :( Also, guh the prompt, it's the single sexiest piece of poetry I've even seen *wibble* You so perfectly wrote the fic around it <3

Her presence echoes in this room, in every room in the TARDIS, inside his life, and inside his head and he knows that it will never go away.

Ouch *sniff*

Ok, I'm going to concentrate on the sexy, not the sad :P
He remembers her breath, hot and quick against his lips as he kisses her, making a trail down to her neck where he can feel her pulse racing and she clenches around him as she cries out his name, the only name she knows, the only name he's told her, and he whispers hers against her shoulder, the only one she has, the only one she needs.

GUH, whoa *fans self*

[stillxmyxheart]

That bit of poetry was the first thing that caught my eye when I was scrolling through the prompts, I totally had to write something for it.

Thank you for the wonderful review, bb, I'm so glad you liked it!