Love Lockdown

Mar 29, 2011 21:31

Love Lockdown
Onew/Minho (ish), Onew/Taemin (past), PG-13, ~2000 words

'Til we lose control, system overload )

shinee: minho, angst like an angsty thing, shinee: onew

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nautisch March 30 2011, 05:04:18 UTC
please tell me where you get adorable disney icons like yours, megan :(

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stillresisting March 31 2011, 14:07:32 UTC
I am glad you liked it!! And I'm glad the imagery worked, I was worried that it would seem too dense or slow or something. Because you're right, not a lot happens in here. XD But I still wanted it to move.

No, you're making perfect sense! That's exactly what I was going for and I'm so so so glad it worked ;________;

I HOPE YOU LIKE IT the style's kind of different and I don't really know what I'm doing ;aklsfj;adks but at least it's your OTP?? (I think you should abide by the contract and finish your olymfic!! Also you'll get it regardless if I don't manage to finish it by tomorrow evening, which at the moment is looking rather likely. :|)

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itachibana13 March 30 2011, 02:36:08 UTC
:D!!!! i'm so glad you finished it *____* but anyways! THIS IS REALLY GOOD AND I LOVE IT SO ( ... )

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stillresisting March 31 2011, 14:12:48 UTC
I AM GLAD YOU LIKE IT :) :) :) :) Thank you so much for looking over it for me!

And thank you for thinking about it and understanding what I was trying to do with the robot stuff, because I was afraid I wasn't going to get the idea across very well -- especially since I didn't know how to explain it until I read your analysis, but it's exactly what I was going for. :')

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ontaejongminkey March 30 2011, 02:45:38 UTC
SPOTTING 'cos it's mah OTP<3

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ontaejongminkey March 30 2011, 02:56:31 UTC
*brain shutdown*
*incoherency*

I want to summarize my comment with just one word--GORGEOUS.
Okay, I lied. 2 words--GORGEOUS AND EXCELLENT.
Naaah~3 is better--GORGEOUS, EXCELLENT AND PERFECT.

I really love this jsyk~
My top 1 OTP (minho/onew) + my top 2 (onew/taemin) = HAPPY ME!

Thank you so much for being such a great writer! *3*

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stillresisting March 31 2011, 14:18:27 UTC
Ahhh, thank you for reading and enjoying it! :D

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ex_argh March 30 2011, 03:38:26 UTC
Wow this was just amazing. ♥ The way you used words in this was so wonderful I felt as if I could feel the beat of Jinki's heart (and then the whir) along with him. And how Jinki stopped feeling things until Minho came along. Idk the contrasts and just everything in this was superb!

This just leaves me speechless ^^; it's going into my memories because I love it. I feel like this comment ;_; is completely inadequate to show how much I love this. ^^;

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stillresisting March 31 2011, 14:31:51 UTC
;sklfads thank you so much! I am flattered that you liked it that much. ♥

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ex_argh April 4 2011, 01:43:58 UTC
^^ no problem :D

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volatileflame March 30 2011, 03:40:26 UTC
wow~ <3
love it

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stillresisting March 31 2011, 14:32:05 UTC
Thank you!

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